| Author | Topic: Thursday's Twilight Dreams |
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Location: Clearwater, FL |  posted Monday, June 11, 2012 8:38:53 PM 
At 21, I met my son he was wearing a gold mask-
He said "don't ask, only way I know my pops is his old flask"-
Said "oh dag". The vision was so rad-
Was shocked I was a drunk, then shocked I was a dad-
Bad perspective, I get it, but these corrective-
Lenses aint made for MENSA, I copped em cuz their reflective-
And so am I, a poet who flow it wise-
Exposing you to the truth, but its coded within the lies-
Im coated in disguise, maneuvering through the Matrix-
Peruvians in the basement, abusing a brutish racist-
I turn a blind eye and defy their foolish statements-
Im white and quite tight, you black and whack, face it-
You brown and sound basic. I could go on for days-
You talking lights and lines, I spit photons and rays-
My quotes on display at well learned institutions-
my musics the solution, your music is pollution-
Sixteen of the week? lets get a leader board going Coast.
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Monday, June 11, 2012 10:08:21 PM 
good stuff...Partial IP: 62.254.100 |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Wednesday, June 13, 2012 3:57:39 PM
noice. i can dig itPartial IP: 17.208.214 |
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Location: Undisclosed | posted Wednesday, June 13, 2012 8:06:57 PM
Trash...
It's all over the place and makes zero sense.
BTW
It's ok that you're white and racist...
We dig it.Partial IP: 27.131.249 |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Wednesday, June 13, 2012 8:10:50 PM
yp zz when the last time you drop some bars essay. ain't seen a zz post in .....can't even remember when. know ya got some bars you crotchety ole fuckerPartial IP: 17.208.214 |
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Location: Clearwater, FL | posted Wednesday, June 13, 2012 8:24:58 PM
ZZ- Incase you didn't read the title... these were dreams I was having in the twilight of Thursday.... I don't remember any dream sequences that flowed together naturally. Nor do I think you would want to read a full 16 of one dreams' meaning to me.
In short, this was my attempt at an abstract idea... write down what I just dreamt... then I went back and made it flow.
anything worthy of a beat I will just post the finished track.Partial IP: .160.83.22 |
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Location: Clearwater, FL | posted Wednesday, June 13, 2012 8:27:38 PM
And am I racist? Because I used black and brown? thats pretty narrow of you.
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Member Since: 1999 | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 12:17:13 AM
i just read your question post and expected this to blow but thought it was pretty dope until the colored parts and really i dont even give a shit about racism or if you were being racist or not. its whatever man. your bars read long winded and amateurish. its prolly cause florida.Partial IP: .87.88.105 |
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Location: Undisclosed | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 10:58:06 PM
^ THAT is my mutherfucking DUDE!
Don't care what the alias is...
WE keep it 100!
Fucking Florida...Partial IP: 27.131.249 |
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Location: i've stopped at gas stations in compton, inglewood, n bellflower in the middle of night with no fear | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 11:54:29 PM
all i would do is change up the word rad
i hate that word lol
i dig it thoughPartial IP: .60.154.48 |
