| Author | Topic: Hottt New Sh*t!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Total Posts: 957 Member Since: 2009 Location: Baltimore, MD. U.S. | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 1:09:13 PM  Let me write one more & go off like a light switch/ but I'm really on all the time so that first line is sike bitch/ I keep movin myself forward when I put on my white kicks/ but they old & dirty you heard me lyin like this/ but it dont matter they get me from A to B/ when people whippin they cars so hard I call it slavery/ I'm made 2 be a skeptic & shit on people like septic/ then take some good shit & use Sick 2 infect it/ cuz misery loves company I dont think you wanna fuck wit me/ cuz if you do in a second dead is what your luck'll be/ even wit a horseshoe & a fuckin rabbits foot/ dont ever judge shit by the cover when you know I have the book/ your after shook after shock cuz you know this bastards hot/ pleedin 2 make disaster stop is somethin that you ask alot/ this masters not gonna stop teachin the student/ cuz witout me around you'll always remain stupid/Partial IP: 251.80.131 |
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 5:00:17 PM  Fuck a sucker punch I hit faster than sick jabber Leave a bitch rapper with lips fatter than Mick Jagger Sick bladder, so you know I'm shitting on the glitz glamour Rich bastards masking my slick grammar with chit chatter
I wasn't trying to diss you, I just wanted to rhyme some shit with your name.Partial IP: 57.159.211 |
Total Posts: 1463 Member Since: 2010 | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 5:13:34 PM  I like it sick..
I like yours too G hahaPartial IP: 8.41.90.91 |
Total Posts: 10191 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 5:20:10 PM  As Hades wrecks, the plagues are next maybe wars'll flame, embroider slain with morbid rain enforcing death Incorporating tats and scars as if the earth was flesh Like it's Raining Bahamuts in hiroshima's specPartial IP: .60.154.48 |
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA | posted Thursday, June 14, 2012 5:58:40 PM  Damn I should've used Ritz cracker.
Thanks Kiefntee. Sick Jabber you had some nice lines in there too. I didn't even read it until now lol.
whipping cars like slavery dead luck even with a horseshoe & rabbits foot
Not badPartial IP: 57.159.211 |
Total Posts: 1669 Member Since: 2009 Location: in comes Phil Da Agony and his 5'1 | posted Monday, June 18, 2012 8:11:54 PM  when people whippin they cars so hard I call it slavery/ -- nice line. So Hard?
I'm made 2 be a skeptic & shit on people like septic/ then take some good shit & use Sick 2 infect it/ - i liked the "shit on people like septic" but then you say shit again in the next line, maybe take that word out and just say "good"
dont ever judge shit by the cover when you know I have the book/ -- this stood out as well
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Total Posts: 957 Member Since: 2009 Location: Baltimore, MD. U.S. | posted Friday, June 22, 2012 6:53:50 PM  Good lookin on the feedback ya'll. Why is it that in almost everythang I post people start cypherin outta nowhere?Partial IP: 40.108.173 |