|Author||Topic: The Ton|
Total Posts: 220
Member Since: 2008
Location: Las V, NV, US
| posted Friday, June 15, 2012 5:20:20 AM |
What's a motherfukkin rap!
It's a fact!
a late demeanor where you see-through--
we're even do!
step up the rack!
when you see what's life like,
you got to bring an arson that'll hard-
en a stare,
what a pardon seems fair?
bring it deep and don't start nuttin
don't try it
don't lie to me
you're a fundamentalist idealist
I think through
naive like burst open hole
which with that I think there could be a new beginning
don't be stupid rugged n donin'
isn't woe in?
you do it but then pretend it's false
sure seems like it
so do drop it!
they hell's wars thought they can abominate
delicacy beyond tampering a thug bulger
you dumb fukkin for hoes
sure shot deviant cop
and rock the spectators dip end and delve off
head to dirt undid
you hit this? *puff*puff*
i had it
broom bitch i'ma get you
there's nothing wrong with that--
should i drop kick
both your eyes til they dead in or out thin
couldn't make breakfast for hoes who don't know
to appreciate a donin
must mess devil's heartache
so don't start then! I win!!!
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Member Since: 2012
|posted Friday, June 15, 2012 1:05:51 PM |
Sorry man, but I read it a couple of times and couldn't feel the flow. I may not be reading it right (you sorta formatted it strange: on purpose?).
Maybe if you put it to audio I'd understand... sometimes I'm a little slow.
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Total Posts: 1596
Member Since: 2010
|posted Friday, June 15, 2012 8:14:04 PM |
^ what he said
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