| Author | Topic: The Ton |
Total Posts: 220
Member Since: 2008
Location: Las V, NV, US |  posted Friday, June 15, 2012 5:20:20 AM 
What's a motherfukkin rap!
It's a fact!
a late demeanor where you see-through--
we're even do!
step up the rack!
when you see what's life like,
you got to bring an arson that'll hard-
en a stare,
what a pardon seems fair?
bring it deep and don't start nuttin
hang down
don't try it
you're unwound
don't lie to me
you're a fundamentalist idealist
I think through
all that
naive like burst open hole
which with that I think there could be a new beginning
bloopered?
don't be stupid rugged n donin'
isn't woe in?
you do it but then pretend it's false
sure seems like it
so do drop it!
innuande this
dripping cougars
they hell's wars thought they can abominate
delicacy beyond tampering a thug bulger
you dumb fukkin for hoes
sure shot deviant cop
and rock the spectators dip end and delve off
head to dirt undid
like dust--thick
you hit this? *puff*puff*
i had it
broom bitch i'ma get you
there's nothing wrong with that--
should i drop kick
both your eyes til they dead in or out thin
spectacles
couldn't make breakfast for hoes who don't know
to appreciate a donin
must mess devil's heartache
so don't start then! I win!!!Partial IP: 173.29.210 |
Total Posts: 19
Member Since: 2012 | posted Friday, June 15, 2012 1:05:51 PM
Sorry man, but I read it a couple of times and couldn't feel the flow. I may not be reading it right (you sorta formatted it strange: on purpose?).
Maybe if you put it to audio I'd understand... sometimes I'm a little slow.Partial IP: 32.104.226 |
Total Posts: 1596
Member Since: 2010 | posted Friday, June 15, 2012 8:14:04 PM
^ what he saidPartial IP: 8.41.90.91 |
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