posted Sunday, June 17, 2012 11:48:06 AM Pain in my eyes, my hearts still strugglin' banks to the sky my stomachs still rumblin fakes in disguise, I thought I saw some of dem fakes in disguise, I dont want none of them
play with the rhymes to come up with somethin-then amaze all the eyes who thought I was nothin-and change all the lies, cus I bring substance-in the days and the times where everybodys strugglin'
just something I typed up real quick... lemme know how it reads
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posted Sunday, June 17, 2012 9:08:06 PM second verse was better. cadence was cool. seem to be improvin with each drop. gettin a better feel of the flows. good stuff. keep at it. k.i.m.