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kiefntee

Total Posts: 1464
Member Since: 2010

posted Sunday, June 17, 2012 11:48:06 AM

Pain in my eyes,
my hearts still strugglin'
banks to the sky
my stomachs still rumblin
fakes in disguise,
I thought I saw some of dem
fakes in disguise,
I dont want none of them

play with the rhymes
to come up with somethin-then
amaze all the eyes
who thought I was nothin-and
change all the lies,
cus I bring substance-in
the days and the times
where everybodys strugglin'

just something I typed up real quick... lemme know how it reads

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Criminal Mindead

Total Posts: 1903
Member Since: 2011
Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!!

posted Sunday, June 17, 2012 9:08:06 PM

second verse was better. cadence was cool. seem to be improvin with each drop. gettin a better feel of the flows. good stuff. keep at it. k.i.m.

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