| Author | Topic: J.A.G. |
Total Posts: 2154
Member Since: 2011
Location: Wigger Slam Champ |  posted Sunday, June 17, 2012 2:04:57 PM  
random vers i just wrote for you dope motherfuckers off the top. 8minutes
trial and error i have learned the hard way,
ive come up with no come uppance, the smart way/
jury's been out since december 94,
i cant even think what the verdict be, or what im in here for/
this is a judgement, for a lifetime of struggling,
ive been stretched and nearly snapped, coast like a bungie string/
at most like the dummy king, a monarch of idiots,
ive been spittin real shit just to kill this, bomb art intricates/
lawn dart penetrates, garage doors fail safe,
but somehow someway, in front of the magistrate/
what happens is fate? a question of laziness,
ive smoked till im done, numb but seen sun thru the haziness/
im a gawd by myself, less you all fortify strength in this,
but i have consistently been ignorant, and forgot to give thanks in this/
so before i enter the courtroom, let me take my bar exam,
need to defend myself against the friends of hell, foresake how on guard I am/
how hard i be, palladium artistry guarding me,
ive raised up my roof and applied the planets above me/
i planned that they'd love me, my beautiful resourcefulness,
but now its penance of a judice, truth hits at the source in this/Partial IP: .168.42.29 |
Total Posts: 1903
Member Since: 2011
Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Sunday, June 17, 2012 9:05:31 PM
good stuff. rewrite tightened it up.
"ive come up with no come uppance, the smart way/"
dope line
k.i.m.Partial IP: 77.1.31.67 |
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