Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 10:23:06 AM Burgeoning thoughts that I be on some self sabotage So I hide from my subconscious, under my conscious camouflage Under my minds pup tent, I seek to bring forth self But women, weed, and petty shit, helps elude the first step This is a sure bet, that I walk a thin line Between a murderer and poet, I stalk prey in deep mines. (minds) Chalk splays, the perpetual running figure In Streets occupied by sexual stunning figures But more like figurines, marionette ballerinas Pimps hold strong strings, tied to horses in arenas Spy the course set forth, I dig deep just to hide Beneath way to much passion, talent springs from inside Dominate my work day, patternizing haiku times 8 Far from great on my worst day. Patronizing I who rhymes straight Maternal my music, I nurse from this exhale Hoping to use it, I cursive foreign like penpals Getting fucking deeper, lazy ass thinker Serious shit tunes You out, like cells did beepers Now I see I'm weaker, fuckin females and grape swishers I stand up like patton, on patron and try to fly like King Fishers Dominant bird of prey Non prominent when displayed Next to American Bald Eagles Falcon or osprey But the Fisher has the best set of weapons from anyone of they. Or them, so I stem, build and cell research Finding females from high up my tree perch Cataloging my data blogging, so that I can see first Saturn gas patterns, Now im gettin fuckin deeper Sit down, now dig down to the core, Try to rip this American mask off, This fungus mushroom, de-volve to a spore Resolve to war, with this man u see, I surface Strip it down like turpentine, exposing my tru purpose I know this efforts worth it, I know its in my frontal so why the extra sweat for something sweet in the jungle Lost, Myself, I cross my heart and hope to die I never stop digging deeper, thru the center My own personal Chinese skies. Drop off a galaxial axis, Death wobble turbulence I'm for this Imagining my chakras lined like planets Disastrous gravity celestial cavity fuckin up my inner ear now orbits. Now I'm running backwards, I feel I've dug deeper I don't know what I'm seeking, I cant name the seeker Soothsayer calmate, Booth fire bombs today I went to deep, drop weak bars to make it speak To you dumb ones, numb ones, take it to keep Forsaking these sheep, when I stand like a lamb With curled horn, forewarned I am inside a 'Ram' Cusp birth double dose, rustoleum ghetto two tone dichotomy of biology, That's why I pack two phones 'Bull' Two lives, two wives, two childs, and two races is me Magic mountain lifestyle mind beguiled meanwhile Street fighter, I'm guile, and I style with beautiful poetry Just to let me know it's me, I hit with similar similes Inserting familiar, to come back to a peculiar Thought process a lochness, a mystery I'm viewing her. New Ben Hur, chariot racing against a more physical me So I attempt to overpower with prowess, my power is intelligently. Beckoning. A reckoning between these two beings in me Now you see what it looks like when I fuckin dig deep And forget whose listening, my own hair bristling In anticipation of actually dropping these atomic anomalies, appropriately apostrophied I guess it's apostrophized, and I can't help it I make language bend, now look, can't sell it.
This post is where Im gonna post my laptop recorded drops of concepts and verses that ill finish on the big deck when I get home.
had i made this post last week id have like 20 drops in here already.
i know its mad rough, and they'll get better as i learn how to use this bullshit.
really just some practice rounds that you guys may or may not want ot hear.
its really so I can go back and hear how i was comin on it a few times before I lay it down legit.
just mixin on headphones, so let me know what im missin in the tweaks.
nuff excuses.
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Opus
Total Posts: 1923 Member Since: 1999 Location: aka Denis Thomason
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 10:29:17 AM haha some of it was really good man....it was a long verse and seems like you lost the fow at some points but you always picked it up again....nice beat choice and lyrics...it was cool man...i could see myself listening to this on my underground pandora station or some shit just vedging
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 10:30:18 AM a one take
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Opus
Total Posts: 1923 Member Since: 1999 Location: aka Denis Thomason
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 10:31:55 AM one take...impressive
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 10:38:57 AM opus-exactly man, lost it just after the middle and right before the end. I've tried this verse before on other beats it always happens the same way. Needs a rewrite or a spitter wit more gas.
Good look on listening man. Was the mix really bad?
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 10:41:34 AM Lol. " One take " wasn't my reply. I thought I forgot to mention it in the post.
But thanks. I'm more comfortable dropping 50 straight bars than I am mixing in three sep verses. Not an engineer at all.
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Opus
Total Posts: 1923 Member Since: 1999 Location: aka Denis Thomason
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 11:05:03 AM probaby just needs smoothing over in two spots from what i saw....spitter wld need a lot of gas or at least some punch ins to make it work especially if they doing it in one take lol
but i felt you lost it at ram and orbit but so much of it was on its forgiveable...maybe even a good change of pace depending on ones perspective
thought you were bout to fuck up at research but killed it with the tree perch joint and it sounded nice to me
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Criminal Mindead
Total Posts: 1903 Member Since: 2011 Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!!
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 5:52:52 PM said before but'll say it again. this is dope. like mad said stumbled in coupla spots but still manage to pull it off and make it dope, like you meant to do it that way nahmsayin. got a strong enough voice to do that imo and the average rap fan probably wouldn't pick it up its just we trained professionals word. k.i.m.
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syks
Total Posts: 856 Member Since: 2009 Location: U.K
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 6:05:02 PM Yeah i like this man,love the beat and liked the way you rode it,nice...
Peace
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 8:51:37 PM Good feed
Runnin over words, like running over the snares?
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 9:52:47 AM I get it.
Same shit I been dealin with this whole last year. Cuttin down my wigger poetry slam pieces into tangible deliverable sickness.
I was thinking you meant mushing my words. Maybe that too.
Either way that's a good look.
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Red Rayn
Total Posts: 10191 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 10:08:50 AM coast you kinda remind me of rza, voice wise, i think it's your enunciation idk lol
random thought hahahaha
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 11:14:30 AM oh word?
Doap
I'll play.
Rayn-You kinda remind me of Rappin 4 Tay, in the same way. Chill flows. Unique inflection. Or young q-tip. Lol. Ad kapone from totally insane ftw.
Observe- has some nor cal bay inflection that is apparent. I think del the funky or maybe a young ass c-BO. Bald head nut. Tweety bird loc. Spice 1 ftw
Liotta- my first thought was AZ. I have no idea why. Nasir jones of UGHH. Gza/lil dap from group home.
Lethal- a lil like AB-Soul IMO. Otherwise pretty unique hard to peg. Jay zish
Sab- lil Andre 3000ish. UGHH snoop dogg IMO. too short. Trick daddy
Shapeless-the lead singer from butthole surfers mixed with cake and odB/Mf doom/uGOd
V jones- b.o.b. mixed with el. p and method man. Joe buddenesque
DougemGraves-young ass scarface mixed with ice cube.
IV/kordlyss-hella young ass eminem mixed with slick rick an some otha cat I can't recall.
Syks- uks biggie smalls mixed with proof.
Saga- uks Willie the kid.
FLAK- ll cool adam.
I'm runnin out of steam. Shows how much I listen to new music too.
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Red Rayn
Total Posts: 10191 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 12:18:41 PM q tip, dope
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Red Rayn
Total Posts: 10191 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 12:22:11 PM my old stuff, friends said i sounded like a white DMX
i die laughing when i hear my old shit
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Criminal Mindead
Total Posts: 1903 Member Since: 2011 Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!!
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 6:26:07 PM rza's a good comparison. appreciate the andre ish, he top 5 for me. pretty spot on comparisons i think v more like luda style wise with a better vocab though.
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the real dick fitswell
Total Posts: 12057 Member Since: 2003 Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 6:28:23 PM nice!!!!!!!
posted Tuesday, June 19, 2012 10:23:06 AM 
