Total Posts: 492 Member Since: 2010 Location: Turn Letters To Doe.
posted Friday, June 22, 2012 2:36:02 PM WhADDUP THO! been a hot second i dropped something; been working on the tape; this just a lil verse i did to kanyes so appalled beat; quality still needs work; found me a dope engineer that understands my kraft and is giving me the deal of the century as far as mixing goes so well see. Lemme know what y'all think. I'm iffy about it. Am I saying too much per bar? Sound muffled?
"473px; border:solid #999999 1px; background-ima('http://www.soundclick.com/images/elogos/SC_ExtBG.png')"> "background- 460px; 45px; cursor:pointer; background-ima('http://www.soundclick.com/images/elogos/SC_460.png');"><> id="lower"><><> One hand in the air of u don't really care 2 hands in the air if u don't really care it's like that some times I mean ridiculous it's like that sumtimes the shit ridiculous One hand in the air of u don't really care middle finger in the air cuz I don't really care it's like that sumtimes maan ridiculous like can be sumtimes ridiculous
I'm so appalled, stress got me bald all these rappers try pleasing the females be doing it wrong sweet shit come out they mouths, like hittin a swisher when downtown I get my point across hittin a SWISh a game winner game on LOCK my cd gonna be LIKE jordans out of stock, while they corner the BLOCK crack in the flesh I embody president FACes, mount RushMORE was the source of this ROCK phrases, turn into HOTlines one eight hundreds time to be outgoing, like dialing out numbers,so we get CREW love, like we OUTnumbered wantin king STATus feed me like giving a CHILD supper, haters GAS faced leave ya broads GAG replaced with hot sausage, she asking for a BATHroom break nut on her face no tp let it DRIP dry, CALLin all sluts I need a QUICK rise for the occasion, forniCATion she had a blast FORMula shake all in her FACE no similac 614 live Cinemax in a lac twisting a black, LISTening to wack cats So apauling talkin demOnic make em angels like SNOW when falling, live EXecution, THROW sum rocks from, head to TOE his kidney stoned like COLon problems stop his FLOW, can't topple my GROWTh as a human as well as RAPper your life sucks ya BOOK of rhymes got undeveloped CHAPters don't need artist development, watch me go big n show you the ropes that's velvet, at the Grammys, with my swag n brand of fashion lookin fly on the carpet like jasmine and Aladdin... PhotoGENIC in real life I'm copastetic thinking in due time lotta what I wrote I dreamth it road of success posing a threat, come n get me piss on these stream of rappers till I'm feelings flushed n empty, long piss goodnight lyrically it's like u all pissed suge knight off, with the style of that dogg kimbo slice pump ya fist in the air naah straight forward all blunt that you grip in the air like skateboards I'm on one straight pour, the conjur, makes me take force death grip on the wheel riding like a race course.
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Criminal Mindead
Total Posts: 1903 Member Since: 2011 Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!!
posted Friday, June 22, 2012 4:23:33 PM this that fire right here. dope shit. lyrics on point and diggin the chorus. would mos def bump this. props yo. k.i.m.
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Friday, June 22, 2012 8:52:36 PM I'm a check this.
But you seriously need a soundcloud man.
Easier for phone users to play your music yadig
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gravasdoug
Total Posts: 813 Member Since: 2012 Location: rancho cucamonga
posted Friday, June 22, 2012 10:08:38 PM illness wattz...noice drop
reminds me of a mafia...thats dat dude...
team arliss...
i c u shinin...
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kiefntee
Total Posts: 1462 Member Since: 2010
posted Friday, June 22, 2012 11:42:58 PM Im diggin it man..
keep em comin
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K_wattz
Total Posts: 492 Member Since: 2010 Location: Turn Letters To Doe.
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 12:02:16 AM just got a soundcloud; how do you embed it on here
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gravasdoug
Total Posts: 813 Member Since: 2012 Location: rancho cucamonga
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 7:00:51 AM you have to upload and then press share you'll see an edit widget box click it...
top theres different formats...
use flash method...
then at bottom click box n copy n paste in here...
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gravasdoug
Total Posts: 813 Member Since: 2012 Location: rancho cucamonga
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 7:04:05 AM i listen to it more carefully now and notice some of the bars sound stretched try cuttin some filler lines and shortening the wording or make sure the syllables are matched perfectly...
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K_wattz
Total Posts: 492 Member Since: 2010 Location: Turn Letters To Doe.
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 4:00:02 PM good lookin
posted Friday, June 22, 2012 2:36:02 PM 
