Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 11:58:17 AM Brand new track. Your two cents are greatly appreciated.
Lyrics
G Verse 1
You screaming in pain and my brain plays musicals Clinically insane the way I'm laughing at your funeral Lacking compassion I show not even a fraction Of remorse for a corpse that was all about
Stacking the chips and flapping the lips You slacking so I'm cracking the whip; straight blacking now I'm having a fit I take action, get to slapping when I'm rapping this shit Straight gas from the ass on some flatulent shit
I ain't having this shit, I put my motherfucking foot down Never been afraid of heights, so I look down On any man (uh) who never gave a damn Now I'm teaching them a lesson that they never understand
Sticking to the plan, never change who I am Trying to, change the game you took the money and ran I run streets like the middle east, cutting off a hand So if you got beef you should keep it in a can motherfucker
G Verse 2
Please go to sleep, or at least take a nap Or a break from the game with your lame ass raps And if you won't sleep, I'm creeping through the back And leaving with a shotty and your body in a sack
Stop trying to front, you're not a bad man son We'll see who's laughing when the sandman comes Believe that, you can put it to the test Nice try, who's next? We're putting you to rest
It's G and D, U, double B, S Came strapped with raps and a bulletproof vest So you can "click clack" back and get slapped with reality Laughing as you cats try to match our mentality
Go to sleep before I hit you with the goodnight kiss And if you don't ever wake up you won't be missed
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Criminal Mindead
Total Posts: 1903 Member Since: 2011 Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!!
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 12:36:39 PM yo this go hard. mos def fucks with this g. intro was dope had me nostagic, flippin through the rhyme book and shit. fuck a blackberry. chuckle. verses onpoint. chorus dope. ya boy held it down. whatmorecanisay.? k.i.m.
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coastEL
Total Posts: 2154 Member Since: 2011 Location: Wigger Slam Champ
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 3:13:18 PM good rhymes g. nice math
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-G-
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 2:09:19 PM K.I.M. - Thanks man, appreciate that. I wasn't sure if people would like the intro or think it was corny. I agree, the chorus is dope, Dubbs killed it. Fuck blackberries. Thanks for listening.
coastEL - Thanks for the feedback dude, much appreciated.
Again, I really appreciate the input, negative and positive. If anybody else wants to share their thoughts please feel free.
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lord akuna
Total Posts: 1813 Member Since: 2005 Location: VANCITY
posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 2:50:05 PM hard as usual
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Red Rayn
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posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 3:35:24 PM i fuck with this heavy
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-G-
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Monday, June 25, 2012 11:17:35 AM Good looks Akuna and Red Rayn, appreciate the feedback.
posted Saturday, June 23, 2012 11:58:17 AM 
