| Author | Topic: Check Me Out |
Total Posts: 6
Member Since: 2012 |  posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 4:30:49 PM 
what up! im new to the site..trynna get some good criticism! only been rappin for about 6 to 7 months...so all the feedback the better...
if i take my life away, will i see god today? askin myself the same question everyday, so i start to pray,at the same time im lookin for a sign, searchin for a line, cant find it so i write a f**kin rhyme, time is flyin by, im flyin in the sky, ridin till i die, sayin my goodbyes, ill bring a tear to your eye, they say a man isnt a man if you f**kin cry, but i say a man is a man if he f**kin cries,Partial IP: .57.19.207 |
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Member Since: 2010 | posted Monday, June 25, 2012 1:41:39 AM
You should post it so its easier to read
like
if i take my life away,
will i see god today?
askin myself the same question everyday so i start to pray,
at the same time im lookin for a sign, searchin for a line,
cant find it so i write a f**kin rhyme, time is flyin by,
im flyin in the sky,
ridin till i die, sayin my goodbyes, ill bring a tear to your eye,
they say a man isnt a man if you f**kin cry,
but i say a man is a man if he f**kin cries,
more people will probably read itPartial IP: 8.41.90.91 |
Total Posts: 1669
Member Since: 2009
Location: in comes Phil Da Agony and his 5'1 | posted Monday, June 25, 2012 2:12:53 PM
DUARTE, are you gay for hip hop?Partial IP: 8.8.45.231 |
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