| Author | Topic: Persistance - Introduction I Guess. |
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Member Since: 2012
Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) |  posted Monday, June 25, 2012 8:44:23 PM 
Ait.. I'm not American nor English.. I am Dutch. And i enjoy writing bullshit in my spare time. And by bullshit i mean (several examples):
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But for what its worth i see to find my paths,
I have faith in the path that lie's ahead,
I'm gratefull for all that i never had,
So i had no reason to be fixated on that,
Infact, I charish the things i own so much,
Because its all we have, its home to us.
And i have grown to trust as an whole of luck,
One of few who has control of such..
My intentions are even brighter, its enlightend.
Bring out your darkerst sides and light it,
There is no need for games or mind tricks,
I as what i am grand you the gift of lifeless.
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And,
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Who dat dude that you never notice in crowds,
Who that dude filled with doubts?
Who has no doubt in finding this out?
Eager to be something worth for his proud,
But all he has is the calm breeze of norther wind,
Still haunted by his older sins,
How could he ever escape what he gots in,
He wants out but he froze when the gods sing,
And the particals show paths of light as the strings,
get hit, he's in to switch paths but miss,
Now he's thrown in a sinister route of shit,
The angel on his shoulder begging to get out of this,
Then a light appears with a question, can you handle it?
lost in its reflection, he sais lets settle it.
Only to find him losing regretting every senteces,
The story of one lost in life with no heavy leverage..
Longing for better things can we ever? i break and cry,
My tears get blown by the wind, wondering who am i?..
am i born to sin? be gone like the morrow wind,
Asking god's light, can i borrow this?
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And finally,
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One young white kid, what are the odds?
That such guy in the art of rap channels the gods,
Lets them speak clear message of love,
The skie's clear when he's at it and cloud up when he stops,
Let the bubble ya'll trapped in pop,
Leave the rest of the work for them above,
Dont let him contineu he's off,
Placed in a corner where the most sinister rot.
But at a moment of peace the charm spells pais off,
People laced and wasted, No more face-off,
I grip his skin tight and pull its face off.
Too see its insides and they rot,
The apple she ate must have been god's,
But the evil side of it that now is in charge,
No sherif devision left for it this gets tough,
The curse of Adam never EVER left us..
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Well.. :PPartial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Monday, June 25, 2012 9:10:18 PM
some good stuff in here. would say more but its 3 in the morn and i gots to be up at 8. peace from germany neighbor. will drop some more later. k.i.m.Partial IP: 6.131.73.2 |
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Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn | posted Monday, June 25, 2012 9:16:39 PM
i liked this, and i wouldn't call it bullshit lol, keep postinPartial IP: .60.154.48 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Monday, June 25, 2012 9:19:12 PM
Ait thanks for the love, and i cant quit.. I have been at it for nearly 1 year now. Daily its there.Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: Denver, CO US | posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 3:16:16 AM
again i'm impressed You're obviously well-educated (self educated, i assume, like all great minds) and thoughtful but you're also very entertaining and respectably cocky it's a unique mixPartial IP: 90.129.222 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 10:44:44 AM
I feel flattered you call me a great mind, haha. :3Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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