Total Posts: 78 Member Since: 2012 Location: Montpelier Vermont USA
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 5:09:10 AM ***the beat is already done its a sample from the movie american psycho but i dont wanna release the beat online cuz someone would steal it. AMERICAN PSYCHO (hook) American, some call him psycho Outside the skin, he wears pretty tight clothes What ya find within, aint a pretty sight tho Nobody knows where he might go. (verse) His head feels like, how city lights glow As your pity might grow, hes living life slow Stuck up in his mind, Cant find a break pedal Drugs for the time, raising up his face level Thugs commit crimes, hes chasing after devils Not crack rocks n pebbles, whos to take notice Not his own family, an theyve been the closest chemical imbalance makes it hard to focus Feeling lost and hopeless, insanity approaches left outta life, abandoned by his coaches Might grab a rope quick, put it to his throat quit Like whos gunna know shit, so so sick We all walk past him, on the side walk Most dont bother, too shy to talk Everybody else is caught up in their self Caught up in their wealth not out to help (hook) American, some call him psycho Outside the skin, wears pretty tight clothes What ya find within, aint a pretty sight tho Nobody knows where he might go. (verse) Thoughts tend to scatter it only makes him madder He keeps reaching out getting served like a platter On his way up ladder it feels neva ending So he think it dont matter mixed up like batter Without a recipe the stress come after Jealous of em all with their games an their laughter Inside his mind it feels like disaster He needs alot a help but his mind is his master Tries to break it down to each an every factor It doesnt work out it only hurts now Then all the sudden he realized something Being a lil different aint worth the suffering So he picked his head up and moved on his way It Felt alot better in a good mood today Call this a lesson to those who can relate Were all a psycho as lifes what u make (hook) American, some call him psycho Outside the skin, wears pretty tight clothes What'll find within, aint a pretty sight tho Nobody knows where he might go.
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JayEL
Total Posts: 78 Member Since: 2012 Location: Montpelier Vermont USA
Total Posts: 3963 Member Since: 2004 Location: Bay Area Underground
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 3:13:45 PM U mk that beat?
Why u let us hear it? We all gonna steal it!!!!! Someone prolly will....dig it....
Lyrics ok....with a gd spit could be cool but y say bein a lil dif aint worth all the suffering......the person TRYING. To be different or IS different......lyrically there isnt a solid message and it fell apart for me wen u tried to tie it up like that......
To be yourself IS worth the suffering.......to fake like u somethin u not and try to be different wen u really arent isnt worth the suffering......u did not capture all that.....will bill u later.
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Criminal Mindead
Total Posts: 1903 Member Since: 2011 Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!!
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 4:37:34 PM word, why ya put it up and make it downloadable if ya worried bout someone stealin it. might just snatch it for gp and freak that bitch so hard that it will be unfreakable by anyone else yourself included. say i won't
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Red Rayn
Total Posts: 10191 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 4:41:26 PM ^LMAO
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Red Rayn
Total Posts: 10191 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 5:35:26 PM idk some ish
My flow is indestructable like Illuminati Blueprints Leavin tracks of ill stories like Annunaki Shoeprints in the Bull Pen killa... a nuisance Hang my thoughts, Page emboss, then tsunami's move in Keep it wicked and raw, sickinin awe Eatin ya face in the miami heat, take it like Lebron
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Persistance
Total Posts: 106 Member Since: 2012 Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder )
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 6:17:33 PM Criminal :P You wont.
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Persistance
Total Posts: 106 Member Since: 2012 Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder )
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 6:18:55 PM Beat is on fire tho, i dig that.
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JayEL
Total Posts: 78 Member Since: 2012 Location: Montpelier Vermont USA
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 6:57:45 PM Thnx for the opinions i really do appreciate it As i am going to the lab tonight to record it at shapeless.. Before i mentioned that line I Made reference to how society ignored him And how he noticed it and the that exact line Is where i try to start breaking down the moral To the story.. I can see how it is a little out of context I am not gunna be ignorant and ignore that but I was trying to relate to anyone who feels left out Might think theyre psycho but in the end Lifes what u make it and there is no normal.
Let me know what u think And to those who wanna steal the beat.. Ur a bum.
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Criminal Mindead
Total Posts: 1903 Member Since: 2011 Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!!
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 7:13:26 PM i'm just buggin, i could though. shit was nice though. beat bumped. k.i.m.
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 5:09:10 AM 
