| Author | Topic: Stable At A Party Because I Have An Able Body But This |
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Location: new york USA |  posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 12:10:42 AM 
Stable at a party because I have an able body but this
Abnormal condition of affairs leave friction in the airs, brisk
So I’m out and about no doubt I flow and shout out verses
Some bad stuff and I‘ve had enough of criticism like nurses
Stay witty with wisdom, my plain stats chain cats because
Keep my brain phat with knowledge at college no flaws
Being shook is hardening got a book on gardening laws
Planted the crops of Hip HOP and they must grow troubles
Try hurdle lies just to fertilize my seeds, and blow bubbles
As a thug proud because my mind fly above the clouds
Get hugs and talk loud, car has rubber fan belts and shrouds
Route true and try out do others in ability and this smother
Silly behavior, brothers from Philly is really major lovers
The women say, come with the best rhymes just to stay
Abreast of the times cats shouldn’t try and test mine, lay
Down the rules clowns get schooled this happens everyday
It’s an absolute fact always eat fruit for my snack can’t play
With my weight anyway my fate grows thin should go win
The biggest loser and ride in the jiggiest cruiser a real Benz
Folks with weak mind usually freak online but you I’m in
The street all the time drinking that Boones farm sweet wine
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Location: aka Denis Thomason | posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 11:04:13 AM 
ur awful..u never listen..u never get better...u keep posting...ughhhggghhPartial IP: .50.132.63 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 11:19:35 AM
Whats so awe-full about it?Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn | posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 3:45:14 PM
this rap is wack #8
nah im geekin, drop an audio some time
i dug the flow but i felt some rhymes were forcedPartial IP: .60.154.48 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 9:14:55 PM
I feel like you should tape this shit son, lay it down for us main.. Go hard!Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: new york USA | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 8:16:45 AM
wow thanks for the props on this one for realPartial IP: 254.210.32 |
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Location: aka Denis Thomason | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 9:26:08 AM
some of the rhymes forced? jfc..every rhyme this fool types is forced. every. single. one. wtf you encouraging him? every post the same shit.Partial IP: .50.132.63 |
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Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 10:22:49 AM
sorry the world can't have the same vision as Madness. Nobody gives a fuck, Opus.Partial IP: .60.154.48 |
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Location: Wigger Slam Champ | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 10:30:07 AM
For real I've read every shaft26 drop. I can't quantify the talent, there are no syllabic/mathematically correct rhymes here IMO.
seems like just random rhymes with easy half sentence punches.
Can he spit this? I don't think so. But like red rayn said. No matter no way
I agree wit opus. Shaft26 really just in his own thing. I have no idea.Partial IP: 28.217.161 |
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Location: aka Denis Thomason | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 2:33:33 PM
sorry everyone cant live in a world where conspiracy theories rule and pyramid schemes are legit cash making ventures.
some people need help out of there pit others like to wallow in them. you can wallow in yours, but since this guy is posting on a board for feedback figured id give him some of the honest variety.
this is an mc board. whatever merit he has for creatively expressing himself i wont speak on... this shit cannot be spit. it is not hip hop son!! it gives meaning to the wigger poetry slam board meme!!!! how someone like yourself, who can keep a beat, can say they dug the "flow" is absolutely ridiculous.
STOP ENCOURAGING WACK SHIT!
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Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 3:38:38 PM
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Location: aka Denis Thomason | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 3:49:50 PM
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 4:02:44 PM
chucklePartial IP: .131.73.46 |
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Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 4:44:33 PM
LOLUMADPartial IP: .60.154.48 |
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Location: Wigger Slam Champ | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 8:56:06 PM
lolwutPartial IP: 73.172.248 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 11:01:18 PM
Why you be trippin about some guy, trying to express or fit in by making music. That you must have become a prick due to ego shit is proven..
Why the fuck you go bloody pussy shit on this guy with "YO WHACK" instead of help him improve. Shit man..
If any low shit comes from anybody right now its from yo raging ass.Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: aka Denis Thomason | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 7:41:43 AM
yo dumb ass. Ive read this guys shit 100 times. left about 10 thoughtful constructive comments not stroking his ego like you pipe dream feeding assholes, but not being mean either.
"yo can tell you have alot to say spit it aloud see how it goes prolly have to work over the kinks keep tryin" yaddi ya. many times.
so thats fine. he dont heed the advice. whatever.
But this motherfucker has a series of rhymes calling out this entire site as whack!! titles his stuff: "this site is wack part 1-10" and shit.
no motherfucker, shaft26 iis wack. fuck that.Partial IP: .50.132.63 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 10:25:50 AM
His reputation does not proceed him.Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 10:33:11 AM
your structure is a little jumbled, but the concept is cool...Partial IP: .88.236.19 |
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Location: new york USA | posted Sunday, July 08, 2012 5:29:27 AM
thanks for the props on this one for rel yallPartial IP: 254.210.32 |
