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posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 4:39:34 AM here's a song I wrote about Politicians who promise the world, but don't give "A Shit" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yfq861ZtEIU
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Red Rayn
Total Posts: 10231 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn
posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 10:24:36 PM
Verse 1
The worst feeling is disappointment I'm so sick and It doesn't help that I have another missed appointment My symptoms aren't getting any attention Maybe I'll sell my soul I'll surely get signed Like that's my Intention Fuck your crew is what I'm yelling out I wouldn't mind fame, but you'll never find me selling out Check Me out, Like the keys to a hotel Room You little bitches do as much dirt as a broken broom Yall need to lay off the drugs Microphone thugs True is I give as much of a fuck as a shrug About your brand new whip I know I'm not shit My Hard work never pay At times I wanna quit My shyness got the best of me Now they're saying look at you Now I got enemies People saying who are you I'm no one Through the Valley of death and fear no man Or evil I'll become the leader of these people But
Chorus
I don't understand this life that I'm living They tell me I'm free but I feel so imprisioned I have a dreamI have a vision But They're trying to keep me asleep With the news on televsions But I'mma dream way I'mma see the way Screaming carpe diem I'mma seize the day And I won't be like those before me It was all a dream til' they water board
Verse 2
Boom Xtra xtra I'm here to murder suckers yo I'm dexter Plus you're not rapper, you're a ho bag Changed my name Cause I broke bad For life I'mma be the walter white Of these I'm dope raps They say the worse part is waiting The media is a corrupt church And the masses is the congregation You bet I'm a threat I'm facing assassination So in a year or two you'll Hear I overdosed medication I wasn't taken by your words I'm not trying to be perverse This is clearly, merely an observation' Of the world The cold war reinitiated A missile crissis Don't let the them find out that Your trigger finger is the ligtest The slightest minor error Must be a sign of terror We'll kill ourselves Before prophecies With our Berettas Acid fall from the sky Burning through your umbrella It get's worse so politicians Can say they'll make it better
Obama
Yes we but fuck it we won't ever The thing about the population Isn't popular for being clever The is politics It's never fair ya'll never learn Fullfil promises? I'll do them If I get a second term Let's give them guns Maybe that will stop the violence You can't expect change If you choose to be silent When ask for document pretend you don't know Or I'mma put you on my killlist Send in the dromes Bitch I'm president Got eyes in your resident Evil in this Persecute me with no evidence Go ahead, If you speak You'll be dead within hour I'll have them break your neck And say you sliped in the shower This my world world I allow you to live in it I'll put you in quick sand And laugh as you sink in it This is 2012 The end of the begining Not the begining of the end This life's not what you think it is
Chorus
I don't understand this life that I'm living They tell me I'm free but I feel so imprisoned I have a dream I have a vision But They're trying to keep me asleep With the news on televsions But I'mma dream way I'mma see the way Screaming carpe diem I'mma seize the day And I won't be like those before me It was all a dream til' they water board
Verse 3 and Outro
Yes we can, but fuck it we won't ever
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Red Rayn
Total Posts: 10231 Member Since: 2001 Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn
posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 10:31:14 PM This shit was dope, but this wasn't about politics. That's the illusion they want you to think.
This shit is about the illuminati all the way.
Just remember to follow forum rules here, and post lyrics.
Keep droppin here and build with us. Peace.
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Adjacent
Total Posts: 7 Member Since: 2012 Location: New York
posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 1:25:44 PM at Red Ryan, For Sure
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Fallout"von
Total Posts: 23 Member Since: 2012 Location: Idaho
posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 2:39:26 PM O yea I like it
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Adjacent
Total Posts: 7 Member Since: 2012 Location: New York
posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 10:00:02 PM Thanks Man
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Persistance
Total Posts: 106 Member Since: 2012 Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder )
posted Friday, June 29, 2012 1:03:03 AM I do as well.
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the real dick fitswell
Total Posts: 12057 Member Since: 2003 Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness
posted Friday, June 29, 2012 10:51:35 AM right up my alley...
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Adjacent
Total Posts: 7 Member Since: 2012 Location: New York
posted Friday, June 29, 2012 4:33:21 PM Thanks guys. Download it here: http://soundcloud.com/adjacent1/yes-we-can-but-we-wont
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Sabotaj (Admin)
Total Posts: 457 Member Since: 2011 Location: bumpin some biz doin the mudfoot
posted Saturday, June 30, 2012 1:22:37 PM word. i can dig it
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Danny Darko
Total Posts: 1669 Member Since: 2009 Location: in comes Phil Da Agony and his 5'1
posted Sunday, July 01, 2012 2:21:51 AM You little bitches do as much dirt as a broken broom -- nice line.
well-written chorus, sounded good. very good sound overall.
that part at the end where you scratched "yes we can, but fuck it we won't ever" sounded kinda shitty imo tho.
peace
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JayEL
Total Posts: 78 Member Since: 2012 Location: Montpelier Vermont USA
posted Sunday, July 01, 2012 5:02:07 AM wordupp flow on that was good. liked it.
posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 4:39:34 AM 
