| Author | Topic: Persistance - Tuff Mofo ( Feed Plox ) |
Total Posts: 106
Member Since: 2012
Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) |  posted Wednesday, June 27, 2012 7:49:55 PM 
Im on a whole other level while i wish that i wasnt,
why must i have this talen why can no other?
I feel obligated but run undercover,
Im on some whole other lovers.
Now in it in whole i am covered,
never sold my soul nah i got it.
And if i lost it ill get it back like pac did.;
Probably your next best upcomming artist,
Flows unmatched almost flawless,
The white definition of rawness,
Unidentified target when my tongque is sharpenned,
Leaving ya'll like "what was that?"
I dont bust at gangster nor tuck gats,
Yet i am tuffer than tuff gets,
I do hang with them ruff' rats,
But since i rap i'm the one the sluts get,
Thus end, and ya'll beter dont think to bust back!Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 5:58:34 AM
not tuff enough mofo. was a'ite but could use some tightenin up. also needs some internal rhymes to break up the monotony steada just rhymin at the end all the time. k.i.m.Partial IP: 46.185.186 |
Total Posts: 106
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 8:34:47 AM
Hm'k, I will pay more attention to that at my next Key-style shit. Feed much appreciated! Bless.Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: Wigger Slam Champ | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 12:37:28 AM 
I feel obligated but run undercover,
Im on some whole other lovers.
what does the last line mean?
i see you working transitions, thats cool.
grind on/Partial IP: 73.172.248 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 12:46:05 AM
In my far off mind it was something like this:
why must i have this talen why can no other?
I feel obligated but run undercover,
Im on some whole other lovers.
Running undercover as in not feeling the need to expose this talent, and other lovers as in other desires in life than expose this talent.Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 10:52:23 AM
transitions are the shit. They really make the rhyme. It took me years to get that down...Partial IP: .88.236.19 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 1:04:27 PM
It came natural to me, never practiced anything.. ( except for multi's )Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: White Plains, CT | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 3:08:58 PM
faggot shitPartial IP: .26.72.143 |
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Location: New York | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 4:37:09 PM
I think it's cool, but I'm reading in my flow. Might sound better if you rap it with your flow. still dope.Partial IP: .85.79.135 |
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 6:38:07 PM
I got a hater that enjoys 5 dicks in his face, what do?Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
