| Author | Topic: Part Rapper Got Art In Chapters Grasp Words And Smash |
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Location: new york USA |  posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 10:48:36 PM 
Part rapper got art in chapters grasp words and smash
Nerds in herds, design rhyme by hand and talk trash
My bold dice roll nice things begin funny it’s a must
That I win money or have headaches, misled fakes have
Events like this and this month the rent was missed grab
My notebook add up the damage pay it and duck rehab
Rhymes continuous and tremendous hit skulls and brains
Cause dull pain like a toothache as the truth take aim
Need some power as life has become sour like a lime
Hype in rhyme has caused me to gripe sometime
When I type online to cats that don’t read and want to
Proceed in darkness and be heartless I only hunt true
HIPHOP, OPUS is a fool that locust need school you
Can’t even stay focus on the toilet stool got a whack crew
don’t drop rhymes so stop the ascinine crying and lying
find fantastic treasures after using drastic measures in trying
to locate gold and donate soul music like James Brown
did “I feel good like I knew that I would,” aim for crown
run across roads have fun and toss loads of kisses at girls
hear voices that’s whack when I’m cowboy that hurls
rope on a horse’s back
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Location: The Netherlands, Hell Gates ( Den Helder ) | posted Thursday, June 28, 2012 11:59:05 PM
Next time, could you place "," where you rhyme? Makes it more easy to follow for people that cant imagine your flow properly.Partial IP: 211.239.98 |
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Location: new york USA | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 8:00:02 AM
Persistance how about this?
Part rapper got art in chapters// grasp words and smash
Nerds in herds,// design rhyme by hand and talk trash
My bold dice roll nice// things begin funny it’s a must
That I win money// or have headaches, misled fakes// have
Events like this and this month the rent was missed// grab
My notebook add up the damage pay it and duck rehab
Rhymes continuous and tremendous hit skulls and brains
Cause dull pain// like a toothache as the truth take// aim
Need some power as life has become sour// like a lime
Hype in rhyme has caused me to gripe sometime//
When I type online to cats that don’t read and want to
Proceed in darkness and be heartless I only hunt true
HIPHOP, OPUS is a fool that locust need school you
Can’t even stay focus on the toilet stool// got a whack crew
don’t drop rhymes so stop the ascinine crying and lying//
find fantastic treasures after using drastic measures// in trying
to locate gold and donate soul music// like James Brown
did “I feel good like I knew that I would,” aim for crown//
run across roads have fun and toss loads// of kisses at girls
hear voices that’s whack when I’m cowboy that hurls
rope on a horse’s back,// my rap stand as I adapt plans//
to suit my purpose life is an absolute circus// got fans
that’ll agree to that
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 10:47:49 AM 
interesting rhyme scheme. I like....Partial IP: .88.236.19 |
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Location: new york USA | posted Friday, June 29, 2012 4:57:54 PM
Slaughter with hype and like a water pipe kick it
While liquid flow through me, all types of wicked
Stuff, go through strife and do nice coping with it
This is an orchestra led by Barry White the music
Is very bright,t carry a tight beat others can use it
Rap shook and adapt books for dramatic representations
Lead an active life want an attractive nice situation
With a girl give her a gift with pearls lift dress and
Hurl kisses
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Location: new york USA | posted Sunday, July 15, 2012 1:13:25 AM
thanks for the props the real dick fitswell
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