| Author | Topic: Appalachian Man |
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Location: in comes Phil Da Agony and his 5'1 |  posted Sunday, July 01, 2012 3:08:48 PM 
Born of the mountain man, a pick axe and a shovel
Trip into town the only way to get in trouble
'Cept with my folks, the switch was a nightmare
Learned to keep in line if I didn't want my hide bare
A dusty old harmonica, stamp our feet for the beat
Singin songs about the crazy snake handlers down the street
Walk five miles to dip in the lake, now that's fun
But it won't be no more, cause Pop's got black lung
Now I'm toiling in the caves to put dinner on the table
Perilous pit of pitch black, a lamp no brighter than a candle
No one ever smiles, we bear it but don't grin
Drink the pain away and cherish our gin
Can't afford moonshine so the night stays dark
I'm just an Appalachian man with a pot belly and a brave heart...
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Location: bumpin some biz doin the mudfoot | posted Sunday, July 01, 2012 3:41:49 PM 
cool so far. should expand though, was developin the character good just gettin into him then it just ends. k.i.m.Partial IP: .131.73.22 |
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Location: Wigger Slam Champ | posted Sunday, July 01, 2012 8:01:03 PM
i dunno brother. i love the subject matter like you have no idea, but for some reason this piece seemed forced from you.
i mean real clean story telling as usual and maybe that was the point. i guess i just dont know where this was headed or what.
what im saying is, why and what is this for?
how were you inspired to do this piece?>Partial IP: 73.172.248 |
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Location: in comes Phil Da Agony and his 5'1 | posted Sunday, July 01, 2012 8:56:41 PM
just some random shit that popped into my head last nite while i was planning to write something completely different and got block. my grandfather was a coal miner...Partial IP: 200.185.61 |
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Monday, July 02, 2012 6:50:37 PM
I love different topics and angles. You could make a whole story out of this...Partial IP: .88.236.19 |
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Location: 16 bars and counting | posted Monday, July 02, 2012 9:00:11 PM
Yeah right. Let's hear you rap this.Partial IP: .111.83.91 |
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Location: in comes Phil Da Agony and his 5'1 | posted Monday, July 02, 2012 10:55:36 PM
lol um yeah I like women.
And I don't like men at all with the notable exception of the videos I have saved of Lethal shirtless doing bench presses.Partial IP: 200.185.61 |
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Location: I'm getting real sick and tired of this shit Ryan. Real fucking sick and tired of it. | posted Tuesday, July 03, 2012 9:42:15 PM
and my wood chipping picture. don't forget about that flak.Partial IP: .60.154.48 |
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Location: in comes Phil Da Agony and his 5'1 | posted Tuesday, July 03, 2012 9:50:40 PM
if i knew how to photoshop i'd turn your sweat tie-dye colors and put a big gatorade logo in therePartial IP: 200.185.61 |
