| Author | Topic: Just Random Thoughts |
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness |  posted Monday, July 02, 2012 5:58:09 PM  
ya'll know by now I'm not linear in thought
Falling in love is easy, falling out of it takes a bit of work
starts off as a lovely thing, ends up being a jerk
I've hurt so many people, even ghosts are shook
Product of failed expectations and them not bothering to read the book
covers only paint a picture but titles do it too
so My mom named me mister so ppl would be respectable
life is a spectacle that sometimes has you hunched over the trash receptacle
wishing last night ended as good as it started
so you could go home like the dearly departed
You never know who works for who, so watch carefully
and if you are not sure about saying it, do so warily
politicians are on missions, but think about it like this
next time you hear the argument-this one here can't miss
parties usually have gifts, and that's poison in german
meanwhile they don't call it by the real names like Chris Berman
no wonder we're a sick society, the system is full of shit
and that's a latin term and I'm sure that's the intentPartial IP: .88.236.19 |
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Location: bumpin some biz doin the mudfoot | posted Monday, July 02, 2012 7:04:39 PM
good stuff, always droppin lil jewels. could have a dick fits book of proverbs. mom named me mister line most memorable. have a german homie who raps who goes by der gift sift, which means poison sipper. k.i.m.Partial IP: 77.1.12.47 |
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Location: LAS VEGAS,NV,U.S. | posted Monday, July 02, 2012 7:38:33 PM
again cant catch the flow, so im takin it, this is more of a poem type than a rap. if so, enjoyable read.
"no wonder we're a sick society, the system is full of shit
and that's a latin term and I'm sure that's the intent"Partial IP: 47.208.169 |
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Tuesday, July 03, 2012 3:07:01 AM
yea, I used to be so concerned about rhyme and structure. Now I'm doing more of just saying what's on my mind and running with it. No real pattern or flow, just a train of dyslexic thought...Partial IP: .88.236.19 |
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