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posted Thursday, July 05, 2012 6:35:07 PM The realer shit gets, the faker the audience if there's any at all, they're probably fraudulent pheromones and copulence cause copulation but if you're soft you're facing not getting any ever the weather is hot where I'm at, can't beat the heat ask an OKC fan anytime you're on the street the way I kick my rhymes any comp will taste De Feet I only need a corner of a bed and a sheet meet me half way- that shit never happens that way somebody's doing more than the other- just because you love her don't mean it's fair to apologize for when you bug her and apologize for her bugging you she's probably fucking you without even giving you the pussy would she? I'd bet the farm on it, then I'd pawn it and run if she's on some ugly duckling black swan shit what am I? A human or a state of being? Some people hate my being, I can't help that even after holding it, I start breathing if I could kill myself to make you happy, would that please you? Appease you? Give you 1 less dude to shoot the breeze to Hell, you can have a whole crew and still not accomplish shit meanwhile I'm solo doing what I do like a virgin at prom don't believe, ask your mom ...
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posted Thursday, July 05, 2012 11:56:42 PM I think I'm gonna write a story tomorrow...
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posted Friday, July 06, 2012 2:46:25 AM read a book, look it up, quit complaining...
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posted Saturday, July 07, 2012 12:06:03 AM
This is my tune for tonight...
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Udon Constantine
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posted Saturday, July 07, 2012 12:50:36 PM This one read like three rhymes in one. I couldn't catch on. The beginning, middle and end didn't seem to belong in the same rhyme. Not cadence-wise. Anybody can slow down or speed up to make just about anything fit into a measure but thought-wise it read like you started something then had to answer the phone, started again without thought of where you were and then went to the store and came back and started again. I know you can rhyme but this one didn't show it.
Udon Constantine "the peephole's champ" i see you but not as much as before
Love is LOVE Watch out
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posted Saturday, July 07, 2012 1:22:23 PM I didn't format it for the rhymes to fit in a reader friendly manner. Sometimes I do that. They kind of are just certain thoughts rolled into another. That's what I've been on lately, not really the rhymes rolling, but the associations bridging.
Next time I'll make it more evident of where to read, where to stop and keep going and so forth. PEace...
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Udon Constantine
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posted Saturday, July 07, 2012 1:59:05 PM Thus the title, "Randomness". Duh!!! My fault.
Udon Constantine "The Peephole's Champion" Looking at my faults
Love is LOVE And understands my ignorance
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posted Saturday, July 07, 2012 6:49:40 PM it's all good. I've been on that type of tip lately...
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kiefntee
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posted Saturday, July 07, 2012 9:25:02 PM Yeah dickfits.. Don't listen to that dude talking about use normal words.. Like you said, Read a book
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posted Sunday, July 08, 2012 12:43:26 AM Sometimes I use small words, but sometimes I'm making a point so bigger words save me the time of actually drawing out the definitions and such. They define the whole thing in a short space...
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posted Sunday, July 08, 2012 12:31:01 PM thanks...
posted Thursday, July 05, 2012 6:35:07 PM 
