| Author | Topic: The Moment |
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Location: Boiled and foiled or deep fried with oil |  posted Sunday, August 07, 2016 3:11:14 AM 
The Moment
A fluke is what they said he is, but now he do it effortless
Movin records, Boomin
Dudes abusin all the regulars
They listen on the edge of they seats
To these venomous raps
So lets pretend he is
Possessed by an exorcist
Energetic sentences, erasing all the blemishes
Perfecting every verse to get the best of his nemesis
From brighton park to hegwisch hes a chemist of rhetoric
But hes white, and he raps, so right away they seem prejudiced
Forget it though, he let it be, he fits in with the ebony,
If music is his pedigree, his vocals are the recipe,
today is his reckoning, i pray Devin's remembering,
Flashbacks of his failed past that damaged his legacy
But hes a warrior chosen and thinks he's sort of an omen
He Swings the sword of a Conan, written by orders of Odin
Watch The Angels play chords on the organs below him
And With the eye of the tiger, his paw is clawin the moment
At one point he regrets years of falling on deaf ears
But now hes on a mission cuz he feels that his ends near
And this is his last waltz to dance with the devil in the back halls,
Near O'Hare, show no fear with brass balls
And everybody elses raps are catcalls that they speakin
...Off the leash hes a demon with no weakness
See, His whole life everybodys always doubted him but everything changed nowadays his haters are proud of him
Instead of clowning him brutal, they seek his approval and all these fake friends surroundin him with hopes to be down with him
But he keeps them at the outer rim of his inner circle,
Cuz he has trust issues, deep inside hes just a vintage Urkel,
The only difference now is that his confidence can raise the roof,
He figured out his place in life forever bulletproof,
his goal's to teach his son to stay driven the same,
Don't need 15 minutes of fame when your livin this game...
Cemented in stone, a path for head of the throne
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Member Since: 9/2016/2015 | posted Friday, September 09, 2016 2:22:12 PM
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Location: if i was locked for the pimpin your momma would swing in for congical visits - illbattleyouandwin | posted Tuesday, September 20, 2016 12:42:03 PM
Yea pretty goodPartial IP: 72.56.5.85 |
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Location: Little Diomede Island, sippin on cactus cooler. | posted Saturday, October 22, 2016 7:28:54 AM 
nice job liottaPartial IP: 00.143.193 |
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Location: INC, USA | posted Tuesday, November 29, 2016 5:58:54 AM
Flawless and egoless.
You are talented and gifted with making words into visuals, which is one of the highest arts.Partial IP: 4.39.51.93 |
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Location: Pasco, Florida, U.S | posted Saturday, December 03, 2016 8:37:59 PM
nicely written, try to keep your lines short tho if they get to long it gets odd to read and doesn't flow all that greatPartial IP: .35.142.96 |
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Location: Boiled and foiled or deep fried with oil | posted Saturday, December 10, 2016 4:54:17 PM
Im the illestPartial IP: 7.77.87.62 |
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Member Since: 2014 | posted Sunday, December 18, 2016 12:12:44 AM
Nice job.Partial IP: 0.121.7.25 |
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