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Marty

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Member Since: 2017
posted Sunday, October 29, 2017 1:54:33 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty
Money goes around like seeds on the ground with both feet on the mound
I see the whole town and I need to be found cuz when this gets renowned
It will leave the underground completely unbound
Then it will astonish and astound and there will be no reason to frown
The world’s most profound is what I want to be crowned
My rhymes I propound to get me at least one more round
Yo G, what’s that sound? Some G opened the pound and released all the hounds
On the streets they surround but before they abound I need to confound and put them inbound
A man who is proud just bowed before a large crowd and they all cheered very loud
Cuz the entire newfound will finally compound
And there’s no need to expound why I never copout; it’s just not allowed
King Karma will always rebound

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dyme secta

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posted Tuesday, November 07, 2017 9:01:36 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for dyme secta
Okay Marty Real consistent rhyme pattern and vocabulary.
Look'n forward to your next post.

It will leave the underground completely unbound
Then it will astonish and astound and there will be no reason to frown
The world’s most profound is what I want to be crowned
My rhymes I propound to get me at least one more round


Fight on! Thanks for sharing. Later.

- dymesecta

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agent7D6

Total Posts: 32
Member Since: 2017
Location: Israel
posted Friday, November 10, 2017 3:40:11 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
not terrific. words used to rhyme become extremely irritating. ok in beginning but u carried same rhyme too long and the vocab usage is horrible. terrible forced vocab

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Marty

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posted Friday, November 10, 2017 5:44:32 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty
Let's see you write a terrific Rhyme

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agent7D6

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Location: Israel
posted Friday, November 17, 2017 12:12:50 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
A terrific rhyme, Note it I wrote it/
Hopeless devotion, in a world thatz so sick/
Gotta a seven leftm headless, invisible grand chief head dress/
Sitting bull liquid skull, rip with pull master control/
Con shams an trolls, angel angles with goats/
Divine truths smuthered by hoax, shhh let's robm blind.../
And act like we float, in u-boats with engines broke/
NO.

THATz terrific, humbley speaking unspoken.

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