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mcfuck

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posted Sunday, November 26, 2017 2:52:37 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
potent slippage, while melodrama karma playout
lay out the notions clearly, hear me, witness
im way out of lines that might make up a box
way out of time to decipher these thoughts
for you, so abort your mindset regarding my diction
truth be harder to swallow what more could you miss then
non fiction abstract subtract simile equisitely
points of topic im off track and still volcanic symphony
simple flow, and kids that know have already broke
code binary, quote unique my canaries speak navajo
cassowary cuts on the breaks, speakers bake on the casserole
last to roll dice, soaked then, in the fluids of foes then
last king of the known men, frozen in time in tomes then
booked in, hennepin county ask him how he knows them
detox with some grown men, diseased while we need them
get your tray stole then, bitch up while they watchin
got em while he chose when, procrastinate the watchmen
get you for your watch then, commissary guess you knots then
landing on slide cots, like why not let him rot pen-
-itentiary thoughts been locked in with bought blot pens
boxed in, boxed up two fists find ways so i guess he ain lost then
pugilistic boss when the soap get tossed in
wrong direction often, thoughts drift off then, corner bunk boss then

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Dyme Secta

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posted Sunday, November 26, 2017 10:51:44 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Dyme Secta
Tight work from top to bottom. The way you flipped
canaries speak navajo to speaker bake on the casserole.
Brilliant. Later.

- dymesecta

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mcfuck

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posted Friday, December 01, 2017 12:55:22 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
ty

corner bunk boss then...
mom bailed mans out of gotham
central premature ducks gone dry
crying oh why did they stomp him
pause for dramatic ef'd exes
sinister thoughts ran thru post Texas
story like stills, amalgamated life arc
so then every single second of my time on this earth
shall be considered high art
motivation literally - tunnel vision im cyclops
mind knots untied by wet tongues and why nots
ask questions of my sessions like the rest of the try hards
nothing fuckin shiny about me or on me
barracudas & military taught me it spot me
speak more dont stop he
soon after lost, left, caught rights like rocky
oddly civil lost contact with good pussy
we'll call her cybil, thought he would rot free
bitch... to be continued, thought she could stop me

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red rayn

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posted Sunday, December 03, 2017 11:19:53 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for red rayn   Click Here to Email red rayn
You gotta interesting mind... I love that you can write like this but tbh idk what you're talking about. I feel abstract when I read this. A lot of my older stuff from 2003-2004 is abstract but I slipped away from it because when I would reread it later I couldn't understand wtf it was I was writing about 😂;😂;😂;

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mcfuck

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posted Monday, December 04, 2017 11:25:53 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
its almost abstract word association the way I write, I try to stay in thematic lanes, but mostly its a game of relativity.

sometimes i have a line in my head but by the time i get to the end of the first line its deconstructed itself and reset itself for the next line.

a funny way to read my stuff is bottom up, last line first, sometimes you can see the mind jumping between a little clearer.

this piece surfs between some time i spent in county and the way i saw people holding themselves in order to get through the days.


thanks for the feedback bud.

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