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Marty

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posted Tuesday, December 05, 2017 3:48:10 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty

I once forgot what Iím all about; to my credit I was in self-doubt
All I would do was pout and spout words about what I could do without
It was the means to express how I felt
Try to murmur a song but the lines wonít come out because I know when I cry I canít sing
Although a little motivation could come in handy
And finding true understanding is like the feeling of the love of two hearts expanding
If you believe in dancing and it happens when mutual attraction is advancing
Now I can see that I just needed to adjust my attitude and show the world my gratitude
So thatís the lesson I learned from my pessimistic obsession
Itís the truth, but not quite a confession; itís more like an answer to an unmentioned question
Iíd say itís about time we live for the spiritual discretion and not just for material possessions

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Marty

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posted Wednesday, December 06, 2017 1:35:30 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty
I know that my rhymes are a bit wack
I'm still trying to develop my sentimental style
making lyrics that inspire emotion isn't easy
I hope to get better with practice

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Dyme Secta

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posted Wednesday, December 06, 2017 3:28:31 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Dyme Secta
Dope title to begin with. It tied together some of the content.

Although a little motivation could come in handy
And finding true understanding is like the feeling of the love of two hearts expanding


The rhymes were clear to understand. Why so hard on your self?
Keep ah living. Have fun writing. Later.

- dymesecta

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