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\Saga Sphinx/

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posted Wednesday, December 20, 2017 6:07:16 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for \Saga Sphinx/   Click Here to Email \Saga Sphinx/
We're in a new-age crusade, mumbling ex-mortis
Indoctrinated by a seductress with a whore's kiss
Migrating natives become customer conformists
On that bandwagon open-top bus for the tourists
& indigenous listeners rush for where the door is
While orphan effects keep suffering their causes
Turning tongue twisted 'hungry for more' kids to-
Butterfinger rapper using stumps to applaud this
A blackened sun padawan struggling with forces
That made rap an age gap, I just can't ignore this
Paper planes taking reins puddle swim in clauses
Hare, read the fine-print in a jungle of the tortoise
That fool's a pack mule, running with horses that
Left clown compasses wondering where north is
Jester looking for direction juggling torches only
Find a disgruntled king's knuckle swing endorses
Their illiterate illegibles stuck in rigormortis, that
Keep mirroring the generals doubling as corpses
On quicksand pedestals their struggle reinforces
Victim of clever fools mumble, feeling nauseous
Spitting nonsensical, but subtle with the pauses
Slipping in rented jewels ya stutter-ring divorces
Skill, so the sensible rebuttal me with plaudits &
Kingpins bury rule under rubble of their fortress

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agent7D6

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Member Since: 2017
Location: Israel
posted Friday, December 22, 2017 2:19:23 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
Pretty iLL shifty still, nifty chills on skimpy gills/
Still not alien enough, but your titanium bluff is crazy in muck/
Any King can bleed out, any God can be clowned/
Your integrity is logged, regardless of what you speak now/
Imuh suck your moms tits, until I pee cows/


Honestly though you're thee asshole....no no seriously tho I AM serious. Your writing is so potent its annoying. Why would you put good writtens here? Stab yourself with a jello pudding snack u bluhee bostid

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Marty

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Member Since: 2017
posted Friday, December 22, 2017 2:26:34 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty
Your style is pleasing to read

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BasedGod

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Location: None Ya Business
posted Friday, December 22, 2017 4:51:10 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for BasedGod
“Left clown compasses wondering where north is“

This is tight
I’ve always been a fan of your stuff on this site

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\Saga Sphinx/

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Member Since: 2003
Location: London, England
posted Tuesday, January 09, 2018 3:36:45 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for \Saga Sphinx/   Click Here to Email \Saga Sphinx/
Thanks for peeping

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Lyricalxs

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Location: Dallas, Tx
posted Tuesday, January 16, 2018 12:32:58 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Lyricalxs   Click Here to Email Lyricalxs
"Butterfinger rapper using stumps to applaud this
A blackened sun padawan struggling with forces
That made rap an age gap, I just can't ignore this
Paper planes taking reins puddle swim in clauses
Hare, read the fine-print in a jungle of the tortoise
That fool's a pack mule, running with horses that
Left clown compasses wondering where north is"

that whole shit there.......
reminds me of myself back in the day when i was putting
shit together like that.....lol.
Nice work man.

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\Saga Sphinx/

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Location: London, England
posted Thursday, February 01, 2018 3:57:59 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for \Saga Sphinx/   Click Here to Email \Saga Sphinx/
Yeah, I always put these type of verses together as more of an exercise than something I would actually record. I even put myself to sleep with the repetition. It's always about just tryna stay sharp & boundaries have always helped me with that. (Ha you got me talking like I still rap, lol).

I appreciate the look tho. Throw something up yourself & i'll gladly return the favour, or follow on from where you jump off.

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ShaeTheArtist

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Member Since: 2018
Location: NJ, USA
posted Friday, February 02, 2018 12:35:49 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for ShaeTheArtist
I feel like I usually get exhausted by verses where every line rhyme, but this gave me energy tbh. Keep doin ya thing sir

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