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What's Wrong With My Bars?
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Devante1994

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Member Since: 2018
Location: Houston, Tx, USA
posted Sunday, June 10, 2018 4:31:44 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Devante1994
I'm trying to make this rap work/
But can't see growth/
I need advice/
It's cold out here that's a coat/

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agent7D6

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posted Saturday, June 16, 2018 1:53:57 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
Stfu

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Devante1994

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posted Wednesday, June 20, 2018 11:06:00 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Devante1994
My bars suck that bad?

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Porkelin

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posted Saturday, June 23, 2018 9:37:53 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Porkelin
Rhymes, rhythm, structure, metaphor, it's all bad. But that's alright, creativity takes practice.
I'm guessing you wrote too many bar lines by mistake. 4 beats make 1 bar. Kick snare kick snare. 4 syllables over 1 bar is extremely slow.
Try to follow this beat. Beat counts center screen, bar counts top left corner.

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