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Ionus Z051

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posted Friday, February 15, 2019 12:03:54 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Ionus Z051   Click Here to Email Ionus Z051
One Day…
I… Was sitting in my room – playing nintendo…
Heard a shot… a bullet flew through my window…
Dropped my controller… then I reached for my pistol…
Heard a scream… now there’s blood on my pillow…
I see red – followed by tears in my woman’s eyes…
She looks scared & begs me not to go outside…
But right now I’m stuck between anger & pride…
I see 2 victims in the street that had nowhere to hide…
I ask questions – no answers – so I grab my gat…
Snatch a youngin’ “Yo, tell me where the fuck they at!”…
He points north – I go forth… set to retaliate…
Run the light – make a right… then I accelerate…
Sirens blaring – cops rush to the scene of the crime…
But they don’t care about the victims – just the overtime…
No need to question witnesses – cuz everybody’s blind…
Maybe the cops’ll surprise… fuck that – nevermind…
Hit the gas… rushing past all of the onlookers…
The corner boys… the dope fiends, drunks & hookers…
I catch a glimpse of the mustang the kid described…
Jet Black with a Red Stripe along the side…
My bloods boiling but I know I need to keep my cool…
Ready for war but we’re right in front of the middle school…
These little fools don’t know who they’re playing with…
Side by Side at the light – but I ain’t saying shit…
We get a green – I fall back and scope the scene…
The triggerman looks like he might be 17…
Still a minor – but they a made a major league mistake…
Cuz now I know who they are & got their license plate…
I just follow while they hit the blunt & pass the bottle…
Laughing hard & celebrating like they hit the lotto…
Cruising slow until they make an unexpected stop…
They cross lanes & pull up at the chicken spot…
I roll through… hit a U.. watch from the parking lot…
They tell another Kat about how many Vic’s they shot…
He daps ‘em off and hands them both a wad of cash…
They get their food – quick fast… ready to make a dash…
Back in the whip – they hit the strip by Harbor Place…
I know my Queen is mad as hell because it’s getting late...
But all that I can see is the look on her face…
The shock and horror – now my heartbeat begins to race…
They leave the club and start walking down a side street…
I come up the other side – that’s when our eyes meet…
The first kid tried to run – but he’s drunk as hell…
He cracked his skull on the curb the moment that he fell…
Triggerman starts jetting off at blinding speed…
I see the fear in his eyes – but it’s time to bleed…
He’s getting tired – sweating bullets down at pier 7…
Praying to god ‘cuz he knows he’s getting near heaven…
Oh well… what the hell… I let him run some more…
I keep gaining – it’s raining… he runs up in a store…
But the clerk is a jerk – threatens to call the cops…
Triggerman pulls his 9 – I hear a couple pops…
The door opens – he stumbles out – his shirt bloody…
The clerk claps him again “Now, take that Buddy!”…
He falls slow as I watch from across the street…
The raindrops washing his blood off of the concrete…
He starts crying for help… but he’s all alone…
An onlooker runs off to use the pay phone…
I walk over and act like I’m there to help…
I bend over & tell the kid “You played yourself!”…
He starts hyperventilating – cuz the end is near…
Than He slowly exhales and sheds a single tear…
I leave the pier… then disappear into the fog…
That’s what you get for shooting my motherfucking dog…
©Zaquir 2019

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Sabotaj

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posted Friday, February 15, 2019 7:57:50 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Sabotaj   Click Here to Email Sabotaj
sup bro. good to see your still writin. been a minute. scene was set lovely. had one of them m knight shyamalan endings. peace. I'd probably set it off too if someone shot one of muh kittehs. chuckle. no laughin matter though. d[-_-}b k.i.m.

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Ionus Z051

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posted Friday, February 15, 2019 8:16:33 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Ionus Z051   Click Here to Email Ionus Z051
LMAo...real talk - can't have nobody slaying the family pets... But I changed the ending after re-reading this one, felt like it needed a more cryptic ending. Thanks for checking it and responding Bro...

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