| Author | Topic: Stop And Smell The Roses |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! |  posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 3:34:40 PM 
joint in the works
i was chillin by the dock bay,... high starin at the clouds up in the sky
time just wastin away,... tryna take my mind off of the grind
i was chillin by the dock bay,... just watchin all the clouds drift by
takin a break from this rat race,... gotta stop and smell the roses sometime
caught up in the day in day out, gotta slow pace down
cuz everybody needa break now, before they breakdown
cause you can get weighed down, with the daily routine
gotta break out, so you don't miss all of life's beauty
it's a shame how, some folks never get a break
work hard they whole life, and could never getaway
i dedicate this song to ya'll, in hopes of better days,
and take a break from this rat race, and the cheddar chase
they say all work and no play makes jack a dull cat,
and all i gotta say to is that, is tru dat
true fact, can't take life serious all of the time,
wheres the fun in that, if the jobs done early call it a night
grindin all of ya life, puttin your dreams on hold
leads to nothin but regret, which can weigh down the soul
gotta take a rest break, as ya travel down the road
just take a look around you yo and stop and smell the roses
i was chillin by the dock bay,... high starin at the clouds up in the sky
time just wastin away,... tryna take my mind off of the grind
i was chillin by the dock bay,... just watchin all the clouds drift by
takin a break from this rat race,... gotta stop and smell the roses sometime
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Location: soundcloud dot com/redrayn | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 3:38:36 PM
feelin this, flowed smoothly together, lookin forward to the audioPartial IP: .60.154.48 |
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Location: Meteorological warfare is a tool of our gods | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 3:44:34 PM 
"and take a break from this rat race, and the cheddar chase"
dope
cant wait to hear this
i love all the accompanying pictures
gives it a cool mood
im gonna start doing this too
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 3:54:07 PM
good looks. liotta provided the beat for it. collab in the works. pics do help set a mood though. props to ghandi the pimp/nascar jesus/yoda iverson on that. he'd always have the dope accompanying pics in his drops. k.i.m.Partial IP: .131.72.47 |
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Member Since: 2010 | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 3:54:23 PM
hell yeah man good stuff...
can't wait to hear it..
just a little somethin,
at the end i would just say rose instead of 'roses'...
maybe
"cus lifes just a garden you got-ta stop and smell the rose"
either way I like it manPartial IP: 250.58.176 |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 4:01:40 PM
good looks kief, last lines on some take a look around masta ace nostalgic ish and was thinkin of usin a little sample there from the intro of the album where he say it. one of my favorite records actually. good stuff though. also you mind votin on the drop? at tie at the moment. k.i.m.Partial IP: .131.72.47 |
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 4:42:08 PM
cool stuff. I like the words and imagery...Partial IP: .88.236.19 |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 4:46:48 PM
appreciated yo.Partial IP: 7.1.23.193 |
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Member Since: 2010 | posted Sunday, June 24, 2012 4:52:50 PM
Yeah I'll vote but im at my sisters right now on the laptop I'll have to do it laterPartial IP: 250.58.176 |
