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Member Since: 2011
Location: Wigger Slam Champ |  posted Thursday, June 07, 2012 9:32:23 PM  
An onslaught of my odd thoughts,
Brought to you by my hyped biological,
Clocked like a pentium processor,
Nerd talk,
tech support walk you thru your obstacles/
Need a neck brace my best beats break backs-
I need to find food,
feed and rest-create tracks/
That speak to me first,
that's a very clear intention,
But y'all fear to be mentioned,
scary tears of invention/
Maybe say he paid rent as a henchman,
No cash lifestyle,
Or never seen glory scene storied,
harsh with starch though I smile/
My miles ain't points,
but annointments of new scar tissue,
Issued with compounding fissures,
rivers few cars into/
That's no doubt,
tell ya it's relevant when your dicks hard,
This scar is about pussy,
would she undress and work for discharge/
I worked for discharge,
she told me to drive fast out da lake,
Admit I miss judged,
just budged the volume of the outkast tape/
Grind won't outlast fate,
that's the long and short of it,
old tires time do deflate,
I was gone, launched-exported/
Black out I cracked mouth on the iron siren mount,
Track lost slack tightened,
and my sight went about/
Stopped shy of ninety I might be sliding in sideways,
The rest of the story allegheny allegory stories of bi-ways/
Lime paved rhyme graves,
lined up time saves,
Well then I say let the grind lay,
sign me for a crime wave/
This sine wav is hear say,
heresy glaringly token,
An in my prime brave,
trail of tears rarely took then/
Fairly well spoken,
speaking da henchman turn gentlemen,
Fairing well when provoked,
for broke in my pugilism/
A future mention, mission through dimensions then some,
I'm cataclysm danger,
ranger wrangle strangers for ransom/
Random angles,
obtuse with loose women Bermuda triangles,
Her cool with the wide angles,
so I use her to choose and find angles/
View finder skewed blinders,
all I see is two niners,
Those are better than tens,
getter for the crew sign her/
Signature, in this here,
I am still a fucking juggernaut,
Y'all still stilts trip and blunder, stutter then wonder what/
The fuck happened,
is this drunk rapping,
dropping science god dropped islands,
coastELis done mapping/Partial IP: .168.42.29 |
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Location: curse my hubris, CURSE IT!!! | posted Friday, June 08, 2012 3:42:50 PM
too may dope lines to sift through mayne. been droppin all types of ordinance and sorties on these fools. new jacks peep game. muhphuckahs needta to drink a pot of coffee and drop a box of no doz cuz they sleepin. k.i.m.Partial IP: 6.131.98.6 |
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Member Since: 2010 | posted Saturday, June 09, 2012 11:17:10 AM
Hell yeah I like it man...
keep dropping those freestylesPartial IP: 8.41.90.91 |
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Location: Wigger Slam Champ | posted Saturday, June 09, 2012 11:58:44 AM
i thought this was way better when i wrote it. on the re-read here a few days later theres still some work here.
thanks for checkin doods/Partial IP: 249.129.68 |
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Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Sunday, June 10, 2012 1:48:28 PM
liked...Partial IP: 62.254.100 |
Total Posts: 387
Member Since: 2011
Location: New Jersey, USA | posted Sunday, June 10, 2012 5:37:20 PM
This was pretty cool. Some of it I didn't understand but it was dope. I liked these lines the best:
"An onslaught of my odd thoughts,
Brought to you by my hyped biological,
Clocked like a pentium processor,
Nerd talk,
tech support walk you thru your obstacles/"
"View finder skewed blinders,
all I see is two niners"
"I am still a fucking juggernaut,
Y'all still stilts trip and blunder, stutter then wonder what/
The fuck happened,
is this drunk rapping"Partial IP: 9.248.1.50 |
Total Posts: 12057
Member Since: 2003
Location: I Reek Of Awesomeness | posted Sunday, June 10, 2012 8:44:42 PM
the more I read this the more I'm liking it. The thought pattern is pretty cool to me, maybe because I just did something crazy as far as writing while listening to some old Sage Francis spoken word type stuff...Partial IP: 62.254.100 |
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