Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Wednesday, April 04, 2012 6:58:26 PM Got some time on my hands tomorrow. I will listen to everything you guys post. I made a post earlier on Hiphop discussion after listening to some tracks over hear about how a lot of it was garbage. Please Prove that I am wrong. I'm looking for some dope new artists to support , collab with whatever.
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thereal83jayt
Total Posts: 15 Member Since: 2012
posted Wednesday, April 04, 2012 8:56:44 PM
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DeathChamberzMusic
Total Posts: 97 Member Since: 2011 Location: Canada
Total Posts: 97 Member Since: 2011 Location: Canada
posted Wednesday, April 04, 2012 11:09:07 PM Childs Prison http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5fn0dgJa4fc
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robotjoker
Total Posts: 301 Member Since: 2012 Location: Clearwater, FL
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 7:45:29 AM
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 8:20:48 AM Jay T . Your track was alright , it ain't really my thing but it wasnt bad at all. I have some homies that are in to that sound I told them to check you out.
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 8:29:37 AM Deathchamberz... Wasn't feeling it. Good concept but I just felt like you named a bunch of kid shit but never really said much you know. Like why you wanna go back to that time in more detail. Keep doing your thing though dude you're better than like 50% of "mcs" I listened to on here.
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 8:40:18 AM RobotJoker... The one on the MFDoom beat was pretty nice. I liked the second one better beat was nice and basic and it was in some old school just going in shit. Best of the three who posted so far.
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-G-
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 9:13:55 AM Feedback is always appreciated:
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 10:00:34 AM G... The beat on dazed and confused is dope , hook is sick with the song titles and was feeling second dude's flow more... I'll check out that second track in a little.
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 10:48:04 AM 2nd track ok wasn't down with hook. Like the beat.
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thereal83jayt
Total Posts: 15 Member Since: 2012
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 1:28:30 PM
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thereal83jayt
Total Posts: 15 Member Since: 2012
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 1:31:41 PM
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robotjoker
Total Posts: 301 Member Since: 2012 Location: Clearwater, FL
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 4:25:08 PM Thanks for the listen strange.... Post some of yours and I'll lend an ear.
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Thursday, April 05, 2012 10:08:46 PM No doubt. Do my part to support artists working hard. I'm gonna put a track or two in here tomorrow.
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-G-
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Friday, April 06, 2012 7:41:31 AM Yeah thanks for the feedback man, much appreciated.
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Friday, April 06, 2012 11:09:57 AM This a demo of track on mixtape coming out..
Total Posts: 301 Member Since: 2012 Location: Clearwater, FL
posted Friday, April 06, 2012 12:18:15 PM Ive always felt Dilla beats, nice wordplay with this. Only thing is, I would like to hear you be more commanding. But the lyrics and tone are on point. Nice shit.
Favorite parts :
" I think this is the part where Im supposed to talk to you and act like Im gavin a conversation."
and
" I rope-a-dope attack, step back. this lullaby float like butterfly" .... Ill shit man, keep em coming.
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Friday, April 06, 2012 6:24:23 PM at flowpatrol I can appreciate the old school flavor in your track. And I like it. However I feel like you might be cramming too many words per bar in an attempt to have mad rhyming words. Do you have any other tracks where you slow down your flow a little?
at rosh turned it off after like a minute cause you were rhyming about guns and what not and I simpily just didn't believe you.
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robotjoker
Total Posts: 301 Member Since: 2012 Location: Clearwater, FL
posted Friday, April 06, 2012 9:18:24 PM My bad Strange, I just realized that beat you used is an RJD2. lol . I actually saw him at Eckerd College and got a vinyl of this shit. I think it was 'things go better' . I got he eddie and cornbread ish too... I haven't heard many people rhyme over him. You should do some more.
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Friday, April 06, 2012 9:54:55 PM Have 2 more over Rjd2 on mixtape
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AceThePhantom
Total Posts: 5 Member Since: 2012 Location: California
posted Friday, April 06, 2012 11:59:34 PM
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roshjoberts
Total Posts: 67 Member Since: 2012 Location: Pittsburgh, PA, USA
posted Saturday, April 07, 2012 5:27:16 PM at STEPHEN maybe if you actaully listened to the whole song you'd see it's NOT about gang banging bullshit. it's about what life is gonna be like when that one and final bomb drops and corruption over takes our way of life as we know it.. but you didn't get that far into it.
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dead
Total Posts: 1 Member Since: 2012 Location: San Diego, CA, United States
Quick and painless session gettin some shit off my chest over some kats I used to fuck with about 5 years ago. You know the type; phony homies.
Anyway, negative or positive crit, all is appreciated.
Be easy.
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OZeeGrassman
Total Posts: 4 Member Since: 2012 Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada
posted Wednesday, April 11, 2012 1:07:33 PM Lemme know would ya? -- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_pxiQ2AbI1s
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charlesgranxsmwt
Total Posts: 54 Member Since: 2012 Location: Wisconsin
posted Thursday, April 12, 2012 11:53:21 AM
LOOKING FOR ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK!
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stephenstrange
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Thursday, April 12, 2012 11:27:12 PM I'm gonna get around to checking on these tracks soon.. Anybody looking to collab let me know and we'll see what's up. Email in profile.
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Jay Free
Total Posts: 6 Member Since: 2012 Location: Nanaimo, BC, Canada
posted Friday, April 13, 2012 9:35:43 AM at Jay-T I'm really digging that first track son. Nice and hard as fuck.
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Jay Free
Total Posts: 6 Member Since: 2012 Location: Nanaimo, BC, Canada
posted Friday, April 13, 2012 10:52:58 AM
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Jay Free
Total Posts: 6 Member Since: 2012 Location: Nanaimo, BC, Canada
posted Friday, April 13, 2012 10:54:40 AM
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characterraps
Total Posts: 3 Member Since: 2012 Location: Denton, TX, USA
posted Friday, April 13, 2012 11:57:05 AM < width="100%" height="166" scrolling="no" frameborder="no" src="http://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F38125904&show_artwork=true">
Total Posts: 189 Member Since: 2012 Location: Philadelphia
posted Saturday, April 14, 2012 2:57:08 PM Shapeless feeling second second better , only suggestion I will make is lower volume level on background vocals sometimes it makes lead vocal track come across jumbled... I have the same problem sometimes. Overall though I like it.
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th3ory201
Total Posts: 33 Member Since: 2012 Location: Paterson, NJ, USA
posted Sunday, April 15, 2012 5:05:36 AM your voice is raw, brings energy your rhyme schemes are cool too, my prob is the name Jay-t, too similar to Jay-Z no dissrespect i just think it would be hard to get out with that name but who am i to talk about names lol THEORY is my name reppin Jersey 201, keep doin ya thang tho!!!
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indo
Total Posts: 4 Member Since: 2012 Location: Oroville, CA
posted Sunday, April 15, 2012 5:35:37 AM I'm new to rap, so go easy, heheeh first post. < width="420" height="315" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/XfBpyyXVznY" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen>
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-G-
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Sunday, April 15, 2012 11:54:17 AM Shape that track "Souljah" is awesome. Your flow is on point and your re-production of that song sounds complete and unique.
Sometimes people try to re-work a song and it sounds too similar to the original but it's easy to distinguish yours from the original. Overall very nice track.
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-G-
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Sunday, April 15, 2012 11:55:52 AM I would appreciate some feedback on this one. It's an entry to the Redhook Noodles contest.
posted Sunday, April 15, 2012 2:44:09 PM appreciate all the fdbck i'll check some of the tracks you guys posted and return... at THEORY bout the name ya i get that alot..i went to www.myrapname.com and i got "JT Pack a.k.a. Skinny Blade"...figured i'd stick with Jay-T
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90sGod
Total Posts: 3 Member Since: 2012 Location: Florida|Ontario
posted Sunday, April 15, 2012 7:14:14 PM What do you think of this track?
Jean Castel ft. Bugzy Lavoe - Rider Music (Produced by Wave Russell)
posted Tuesday, April 17, 2012 1:49:54 AM I like the flows, I just wish there was a little more focus on a specific idea or message sometimes.
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BrandName
Total Posts: 8 Member Since: 2012 Location: Elyria, Ohio, USA
posted Tuesday, April 17, 2012 2:13:43 AM This was a diss track I made to my wife's Ex Almost every word is true! It got at him so bad when he heard it he went to the police and tried to get me for harassment LMAO! Thanks in advance for listening.
posted Wednesday, April 04, 2012 6:58:26 PM 
