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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Thursday, May 31, 2012 7:32:09 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
Hey guys, please check out some of my songs and tell me what you think about them.

Rocks To Def by We The Future

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gavind

Total Posts: 79
Member Since: 2012
posted Friday, June 01, 2012 12:12:56 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for gavind
I like Digging on you. How long did you make this all together?

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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Friday, June 01, 2012 10:05:49 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
All of the songs besides the first two are from the past 3 years. Every song is from my mix-tape EPOCH

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apolloape

Total Posts: 9
Member Since: 2012
Location: Canada
posted Saturday, June 02, 2012 4:25:28 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for apolloape
Maybe some better mixing and mastering?

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deedashflow

Total Posts: 289
Member Since: 2009
posted Saturday, June 02, 2012 4:52:31 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for deedashflow
checked out your go hard track, real nice, liking ur flow and that you trying to do diff stuff, nice work bro...

heres one of mine...

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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Sunday, June 03, 2012 2:52:43 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at apolloape Yes, thats exactly what I need. I have FL Studio but, I don't know how to mix/master. I'm pretty much rapping and learning how to produce as I go.

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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Sunday, June 03, 2012 2:55:45 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at deedashflow Thanks man and that track is pretty smooth yo! The video editing was wild. Did you do it?

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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Sunday, June 03, 2012 3:03:58 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
Btw, I'm looking to work with other artist hip-hop/rnb so If anybody who see's this wants to, just let me know.

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d.c.

Total Posts: 9
Member Since: 2005
posted Wednesday, June 06, 2012 8:20:47 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for d.c.
you got flow, you spit on point, but nothin catchy, no good punches, no WOW Factor, and go to a Professional Studio because the Quality is Lacking, I Personally would work on content, being able to spit fast and on point dont matter much if nothing is gettin in a listeners head....

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astronaughts

Total Posts: 49
Member Since: 2012
Location: Minneapolis
posted Thursday, June 07, 2012 12:36:00 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for astronaughts
that shit is pretty tight, nice flow bro.

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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Saturday, June 09, 2012 1:07:13 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at D.C. I agree 100% with you on the production. I'm doing everything in my bedroom with a mic, a laptop, and a sock... But on the content and catchy hooks and ish, I can't agree. I go against the grain. I write songs to express myself. Theirs barely any hooks and I do that for a reason. Listen to the lyrics bra. I'm not saying you aren't but, a lot of people are stuck on this same format. =/16 Bars/Hook/16 Bars/Hook/. I can't get jiggy wit dat shit. I'm working on some "Commercial" tracks for the radio, but I'm just making good Hip-hop for the hip-hop heads. (Who still be punchline flowing though?)

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ROS

Total Posts: 57
Member Since: 2012
Location: Los Angeles
posted Saturday, June 09, 2012 4:37:22 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for ROS
From one bedroom hustler doing it for the love of music to another that shit is hot life fiya dylon. (Chappelle show reference) Any who the beats are sick nasty so nasty that you could pretty much be saying fuck america I hate mcDonalds and I'd be like "this shit is the shit"... That being said I did like the lyrics but agree there is no WOW factor HOWEVER in the setting of a lot of what is being posted or that I have listened to so far (as a new member and a super wack arnolds beat maker) i say BIG UPS!, well done! good show!! all of that...

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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Saturday, June 09, 2012 10:20:28 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at ROS Yeah ok, I guess I agree, their is no "Wow Factor" I dont really write with those intentions though. It's hard trying to come up with your own style and mines work in progress. I been writing for 4 years and only put out like 28 tracks. Also, I don't listen to music like that. I cant even name most of the artist playing on the radio of any genres. Honestly, I don't even know what a "Wow Factor" is.

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Bishop93

Total Posts: 3
Member Since: 2012
Location: Long Island
posted Monday, June 11, 2012 2:11:15 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Bishop93
Checked out Go Hard and I was digging it for sure. Your flow was pretty dope and went well with the beat. Keep it up.

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YaBoi City

Total Posts: 4
Member Since: 2012
Location: Las Vegas, NV. USA.
posted Tuesday, June 12, 2012 7:18:33 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for YaBoi City   Click Here to Email YaBoi City
pretty bangin my n*gga...

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rockstodef

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Wednesday, June 13, 2012 1:13:43 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at Bishop93 Thanks man, thats my latest track and my first on an non-industry beat. It's like my theme song!

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rockstodef

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Wednesday, June 13, 2012 1:15:02 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at YaBoi City
Appreciate that bro!

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blackman_n_robin

Total Posts: 8
Member Since: 2012
posted Tuesday, June 26, 2012 8:44:05 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for blackman_n_robin   Click Here to Email blackman_n_robin
Yo im diggin the real chill delivery on some of the tracks, but where's them wow bars at?

Im kinda with d.c. on this one. If the quality was up this shit would be hotter.

You got a steady flow that rocks with the beat, and the lines that hit stick, but nothing that has me like FUCK.

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rockstodef

Total Posts: 30
Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Monday, July 16, 2012 11:13:44 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
New track up called "Gully" a remix to Goldie by A$AP ROCKY. Check it out please

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flowpatrol

Total Posts: 115
Member Since: 2012
Location: Virginia Beach
posted Monday, July 16, 2012 11:52:51 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for flowpatrol
pay for some mastering or get on some logic pro, but you in there homie, keep doin it

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rockstodef

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Tuesday, July 17, 2012 12:12:23 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at flowpatrol Thanks yo and yeah, I definitely need some mastering.

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frankyfarina

Total Posts: 6
Member Since: 2012
Location: Toronto, Canada
posted Wednesday, July 18, 2012 2:43:35 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for frankyfarina
Yo rockstodef Ya I like the rhymes alot its not just the same recycled words other rappers be using. I feel you when u say ur trying to figure out the mixing stuff. I'm in the same jam, using garageband tryna save money and do it all myself
Keep up the good work for sure, check me out on soundcloud also let me know whats up
-Franky Farina aka. at DJStickUp

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wordsbeheavy

Total Posts: 5
Member Since: 2012
Location: London
posted Wednesday, July 25, 2012 1:34:11 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for wordsbeheavy
Some nice work here g

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Louieville Sluggs

Total Posts: 7
Member Since: 2012
Location: Chicago, Il, US
posted Thursday, July 26, 2012 11:02:45 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Louieville Sluggs
aight.. def need to do something about the vocals, i ran through all the tracks, (whew..!) and for me to give one score for all of them wouldnt be fair, but..
over all, 6.1/10

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jago moon

Total Posts: 18
Member Since: 2012
Location: earth
posted Friday, July 27, 2012 3:41:40 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for jago moon   Click Here to Email jago moon
u sound best on the slow eerie shit.

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rockstodef

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Saturday, July 28, 2012 10:13:30 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at Louieville Sluggs 6.1 Ouch, I guess that's kinda fair though. Plus, mad kudos for listening to all of the songs and coming with feedback. Half the vocals were done on a PS2 Rockband 2 mic a while back till I got a Blue Snowball and i'm still Audacity to record. Saving up for protools or SONAR and a nice studio mic now. I got Fl Studio but I'm still learning to fox with it.

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rockstodef

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Saturday, July 28, 2012 10:15:14 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at frankyfarina and wordsbeheavy- Thanks, appreciate ya'll taking time to listen!

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rockstodef

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Location: Delaware, USA
posted Saturday, July 28, 2012 10:18:30 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
at jago moon
Ha, thanks, gotta be gritty sometimes. To many candyland rappers!

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rockstodef

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Delaware, USA
posted Monday, August 06, 2012 11:45:44 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for rockstodef   Click Here to Email rockstodef
Ok, i got a new track up called Poetic Alchemy. I think I got a lil better at the production. Please tell me what you think!

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Third eye

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Massachusetts
posted Wednesday, August 08, 2012 2:52:20 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Third eye
needs better production..not bad though..

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tamia180

Total Posts: 6
Member Since: 2012
posted Tuesday, August 14, 2012 2:54:58 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for tamia180
Keep Up The grind

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elevent

Total Posts: 10
Member Since: 2007
Location: Charlotte, NC
posted Wednesday, August 15, 2012 8:28:47 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for elevent   Click Here to Email elevent
Sounds good I like the way your voice sounds and the beats are dope!

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K Billz

Total Posts: 5
Member Since: 2012
Location: Sioux Falls, SD
posted Wednesday, August 15, 2012 9:46:27 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for K Billz
Nice flow and good rhyme schemes. Keep it up yo

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PROdaSK

Total Posts: 7
Member Since: 2012
Location: STUDIO
posted Monday, August 20, 2012 8:17:00 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for PROdaSK
nice bars , if you're trying to build your following & need original beats to stand out i produce some dope work .

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stylemaster_g

Total Posts: 90
Member Since: 2010
Location: atlanta, GA
posted Wednesday, August 22, 2012 6:53:21 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for stylemaster_g
very diverse flows. out of the ones i listened to, Go Hard is my fav. co-sign most of the comments said here. needs some polish but you are on the right track. keep pushing the envelope.

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