| Author | Topic: Sandman Freestyle |
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Member Since: 2012
Location: Somewhere Under The Sun |  posted Wednesday, September 12, 2012 4:26:01 PM 
Just a little something I came up with the other night. The quality is horrible since I used an IPod to record myself, but if you can make out what I'm saying, leave a comment. I could use some criticism.
http://soundcloud.com/uhhbojack/20120909-205518
I don't know how to put the actual player on here....Partial IP: .152.7.100 |
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Location: Somewhere Under The Sun | posted Wednesday, September 12, 2012 4:26:48 PM
Oh and I replied to the Flow Patrol topic and the unsigned underground vol.1 topic.Partial IP: .152.7.100 |
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Member Since: 2012 | posted Wednesday, September 12, 2012 6:03:42 PM 
Typically I wouldn't respond to something so amateur but you have potential as a lyricist so i'll give you some feedback.
First, don't EVER post something you recorded externally, especially when the track is also not being recorded through the source hardware.
secondly, you mumble. Have more presence when you spit intellectually.
Last, if you're going to make music, take it seriously. Freestyling is cool but a real song can have an impact.Partial IP: 6.44.60.74 |
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Location: Somewhere Under The Sun | posted Wednesday, September 12, 2012 8:03:47 PM
I do mumble a lot huh, thanks for the feedback. Means a lot. I just enjoy freestyling but if I become a rapper I guess I can give it a try,Partial IP: .152.7.100 |
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Location: Lakeland, FL | posted Monday, September 17, 2012 9:30:29 AM
Actually not 2 bad, delivery and presence needs a lil work tho bro...keep at it and they'll both improve thoPartial IP: 97.138.220 |
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Location: Buckeye, Arizona, USA | posted Wednesday, September 19, 2012 3:35:00 AM
Its on point man really, you just need to enunciate and get some better equipment  Partial IP: .17.94.186 |
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Location: Anchorage Alaska USA | posted Thursday, September 20, 2012 4:34:30 PM
I liked it. Pretty good if this was a real freestyle, you just need better equipment bro and you're on your way.Partial IP: 178.83.145 |
