Total Posts: 67 Member Since: 2012 Location: Pittsburgh, PA, USA
posted Friday, April 13, 2012 4:07:37 AM let me know what you think, I appreciate all criticisms.
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-G-
Total Posts: 387 Member Since: 2011 Location: New Jersey, USA
posted Saturday, April 14, 2012 12:40:48 PM I think the hook was pretty cool. Production could've been better but overall it was a nice melody and fairly enjoyable. You sound a little uncomfortable in your verses but keep doing your thing and it'll get tighter.
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roshjoberts
Total Posts: 67 Member Since: 2012 Location: Pittsburgh, PA, USA
posted Thursday, April 19, 2012 12:37:06 AM thanks it means a lot hearing feedback. But, you only get better over time if you keep up with what you do, ya know? But thanks again for actually listening.
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Apostolus
Total Posts: 3 Member Since: 2012 Location: Chicopee, MA, USA
posted Friday, April 20, 2012 10:56:43 AM The flow is messy.. your delivery is kind of shaky, it's like you don't believe in what you say.
posted Friday, April 13, 2012 4:07:37 AM 
it means a lot hearing feedback. But, you only get better over time if you keep up with what you do, ya know? But thanks again for actually listening.